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11/12/23, 7:05 AM
It's the smooth, vernacular writing - no speedbumps hit in reading it - and the delightfully smartass style that hooked me. Looking forward to more of this tale.

11/12/23, 10:09 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Heya, thanks! I'm enjoying writing part two up - can't wait to share!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 8:02 PM
Zombies are not my favorite monsters and I am still looking forward to the second chapter!

11/2/23, 8:48 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Y'know, I agree - I wrote the story prompted by the challenge. And so I worked my... brain... to try to think of a monster less commonly seen in an erotic setting, so no witches, werewolves, vampires, ghosts. Couldn't quite manage to make my MC actually "undead," lol - so, voila, my quasi-zombies!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 4:14 AM
I love this. There's some really engaging world building here and you present the main characters needs and thoughts' in a really clear way.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks! Love me some worldbuilding, lol...

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Added part 2!
10/31/23, 4:03 PM
This was really well done. Can't wait to read more.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Cool, thanks! I'm enjoying writing the second part - look forward to posting when the Challenge ends!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Added part 2!
10/30/23, 1:55 PM
Goddamn, the scene with the cumshot and the condoms was smoking. Well done, and a great job on the worldbuilding.

10/30/23, 2:21 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks - appreciate it! Stay tuned for Part Two!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Added part 2!
11/26/23, 4:18 PM
I do wonder about other people in this world with nifty powers. Gotta be another gay guy who makes straight guys into good boys. Like a professor. Hehe Sexy stuff!
11/26/23, 4:17 PM
This was very hot and sexy. Love the various povs leading to our main one being in charge. Super sexy stuff.
11/23/23, 6:31 AM
Great story. I love how Romeo went from a belligerent tough guy to a sweet baby boy for daddy. The illustrations are great too. How did you make them? I hope you keep adding them, and maybe some action images too. Looking forward to the next chapter.

11/23/23, 4:34 PM
@[Thalog](/user/show/10033108) Thank you, sir. In terms of AI art generation, I am pretty new to it, and still feel a little uncertain if I want to continue using it. That's why I didn't include the images in the main story. The generators I have used have all come from: [https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/ai-porn-generation/5578](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/ai-porn-generation/5578) if you want to try some yourself.

11/25/23, 4:57 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Thanks. Tried the app. Interesting results. I’m going to play around with it more. On a side note, are you familiar with this story on here? https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/100452 Its an abandoned first chapter. It’s really good and seems right up your alley. Perhaps when you complete this series you might look at this other one and add some chapters to it.
11/25/23, 2:17 AM
Well that answers that. And yeah, Jayson is an asshole who cannot adult well but also has been in an environment that stunted and abused him so that wasthe point of the product. Seriously if he had sense he could talk transitional strategies. I know he's in security but Des has to have SOMETHING to mentor or direct him or connect him to Also Jayson has gone from denial to voracious consumption The chances he's being caught and scandaled are approaching 1 to 1