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Anonymous
12/4/23, 10:56 PM
Please continue this
Anonymous
12/4/23, 1:22 PM
I want more
12/3/23, 11:42 PM
Another amazing addition into the JPS world, Charlie! Good work and I can't wait to see where this one goes!
Brody
12/3/23, 10:23 PM
Fantastic story! You are a talented writer, and I like the extreme torments you put your characters through (inescapable, strict bondage; extreme forced foot worship; really sadistic tickling). You are also very creative, and the ear tickling scene was fresh and very hot. The way you described the teasing fingers and the infuriating smile was extremely erotic. Great stuff!

12/3/23, 10:31 PM
@[Brody](/user/show/10005093) Thanks man! Love this comment 👊🏼
12/3/23, 4:02 PM
Amazing and super hot story as always. Congrats!
12/3/23, 1:16 PM
I really enjoyed this, I hope to see Richard and Luke’s relationship develop further!
12/3/23, 3:46 AM
So is this story already finished before it begins.
12/3/23, 2:29 AM
Another rework! Another successful tightening of events and using what you've built of the world in the future to inform past chapters. Particular representing the lewd, hypersexual nature of pets and Coins and how normal it is. I also love the introduction of some of Aris's pets earlier to ease Jasper into their personalities when he'll inevitably run into them. Oree remains a strong favourite. I love how you write them. So effortlessly charming and seductive. The integrity of the doctor was a nice touch, and Jasper's cunning to answer the question in a way that reduced concerns. Can't wait for chapter 5.
12/2/23, 10:39 PM
Great start! I hope there will be future chapters taking this boy to total submission. Sensitizing nipples is my fetish; but extensive humiliating training is always a turn on.
12/2/23, 10:21 PM
You should do a story where Jason hypnotizes Tim.