So so SO excited!!!!

Gotta catch 'em all!

Happy and looking forward to more!

I genuinely have to not touch myself while reading these because the way you write would send me over the edge in a few paragraphs Awesome stuff

As a pup myself, I would only dream of a pack family as this one. As for myself I am packless. Really lovely and good story.

This was a hot story BUT...definitely had several anxious horny moneys hoping that soaking waist-high in the piggy pumpkin guts would transform the hot track star into a grunting, hungry, cum-mutated, demonic swine with vine tentacles and a jackolantern face, or drone-inducting cum-shots, or musk/piss/semen that causes secondary CumPorkr half-ling fuckmates/teammates/or offspring.

Isn't this one fun? There's so much to unpack here. In Jamie's dream, we get to see inside Dusk's head and into his past. We have his confrontation with his former mentor, and Dusk helping to make sure that "fucker got what he deserved," as Dusk so eloquently put it in Chapter 2. Then there's Minotaur's admissions regarding the incident that sent Midnight over the edge, followed by Midnight's bargain with Master, and the beginning of his true submission and slavery to Master. The next part puts us squarely back in Jamie's unhappy present, where he's trying to make sense of what he just dreamt. There's another confrontation between Jamie and Kane about the escapade of a new Villain or Vigilante. And the irony is that neither knows that the new supe on the block was in fact Jamie, and the event described in Cape News is Jamie's likely future starting to take shape. The League may have an idea, though, because in comes Mentat to interrogate Jamie, with more than a hint of creepiness. The final elevator scene wraps it up so neatly. First Mentat confesses that he (and by extension the Tribunal) now sees Jamie as lost, and fit only to bait a trap for Master. Like that'll work. It does sort of lead one to think that maybe the League **hasn't** cottoned on to who the new "villain" really is, because if they had, would they actually risk letting Master get to keep him? The closer is Mentat blackmailing Claymore, seemingly just because he can. You gotta wonder what's up with that. But it does establish that yet another one of the League's leading "heroes" is as evil as any supervillain. Of the four we've seen so far, the best one is the self-centered, glory chasing jackal, Valour. We haven't yet met Dauntless in person, but given that he is the founder of this fundamentally corrupt organization, and the utter nastiness of his cohorts on the Tribunal, it's impossible to think he'll be any better when we finally do. I can hardly wait to see what comes next. Thank you Neon Demon!

Please! I need a second part, what happened to “Josh”. What happened to Tanner?

The storyline of a repulsive older man with wealth or power seducing an attractive younger guy who wants favors from the man or is simply doing what he needs to do to survive, but finds himself unexpectedly aroused in the process, is powerful. I love the voluntary "involuntary" action and the use of power to seduce the stud. The model's involuntary arousal is priceless. The descriptiveness kicks in just when it is needed, which is when the seduction begins. I have always been fascinated by the dynamic of men one finds physically repulsive but who nonetheless are older and influential and have their way with younger, more attractive guys leading them to involuntary but definate sexual arousal, submission, and humiliation. I think the arc of the story is complete with the transition from revulsion to being aroused. There is no need to add more to the story or develop it further.

Fuck me that’s a hot chapter. Definitely keep adding to this story. My dripping cock really enjoyed it.