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12/9/23, 6:14 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) I also thought it was interesting that Claymore might be one of the few straight guys in the story, which probably makes him immune to becoming a drone ~~for now~~

12/9/23, 9:58 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Master has female drones. We saw the creation of a few in the DH-003 dream sequence. So I doubt all his drones were gay or bi. Of course, once they become drones, they're whatever Master wants them to be.

12/9/23, 10:49 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) I suspect that submission to Master is the greatest delight that any drone can experience!! Anyways, one theory I have is that the League can now confirm that symbiotes/constructs is what Master uses, but I do think that they underestimate the merging aspect that super drones seem to have. Come to think of it, once Jamie is swallowed by his symbiote metaphorically, I'm curious as to what Mentat could hear his thoughts be!
12/9/23, 4:16 PM
Mentat quoting Master is an underrated joke ngl

12/9/23, 6:13 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Is it a joke? Or something more... sinister... :wink:

12/9/23, 7:07 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I missed the quote, and this time through I was looking for it.

12/9/23, 7:16 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) OK. Found it. Great catch, thst! I'd say it's just great minds thinking alike. Though if you can find a credible way to get something sinister out of it, @Neon Demon, that'd be pretty amazing.
12/9/23, 12:39 AM
I'm glad that my hunch that the collar carries the symbiote/dronification process! I love this series and I like can't wait for more :3

12/9/23, 5:46 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) The collar carries the symbiote/dronification process **sometimes**. Remember that Jamie's symbiote came in the form of a weird condom sort of thing. Or maybe it was just a blob of latex that shaped itself that way when Horizon applied it to Jamie's cock. I suspect the symbiote can take whatever form Master wants or needs it to. In Archie's case, the collar was fitting because it's a traditional symbol of ownership and the submission of slave to Master.
12/9/23, 4:18 PM
So so SO excited!!!!
12/9/23, 4:14 PM
Gotta catch 'em all!
12/6/23, 8:02 AM
Happy and looking forward to more!

12/9/23, 12:29 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I can promise, more is on the way now...
Boomer
12/9/23, 2:04 AM
I genuinely have to not touch myself while reading these because the way you write would send me over the edge in a few paragraphs Awesome stuff
12/9/23, 1:02 AM
As a pup myself, I would only dream of a pack family as this one. As for myself I am packless. Really lovely and good story.
12/4/23, 1:33 PM
This was a hot story BUT...definitely had several anxious horny moneys hoping that soaking waist-high in the piggy pumpkin guts would transform the hot track star into a grunting, hungry, cum-mutated, demonic swine with vine tentacles and a jackolantern face, or drone-inducting cum-shots, or musk/piss/semen that causes secondary CumPorkr half-ling fuckmates/teammates/or offspring.

12/8/23, 1:32 PM
@[CubTx](/user/show/452896) Had a couple ideas like that but ran out of time with my story ideas so went with a quick end.
12/8/23, 2:57 AM
Isn't this one fun? There's so much to unpack here. In Jamie's dream, we get to see inside Dusk's head and into his past. We have his confrontation with his former mentor, and Dusk helping to make sure that "fucker got what he deserved," as Dusk so eloquently put it in Chapter 2. Then there's Minotaur's admissions regarding the incident that sent Midnight over the edge, followed by Midnight's bargain with Master, and the beginning of his true submission and slavery to Master. The next part puts us squarely back in Jamie's unhappy present, where he's trying to make sense of what he just dreamt. There's another confrontation between Jamie and Kane about the escapade of a new Villain or Vigilante. And the irony is that neither knows that the new supe on the block was in fact Jamie, and the event described in Cape News is Jamie's likely future starting to take shape. The League may have an idea, though, because in comes Mentat to interrogate Jamie, with more than a hint of creepiness. The final elevator scene wraps it up so neatly. First Mentat confesses that he (and by extension the Tribunal) now sees Jamie as lost, and fit only to bait a trap for Master. Like that'll work. It does sort of lead one to think that maybe the League **hasn't** cottoned on to who the new "villain" really is, because if they had, would they actually risk letting Master get to keep him? The closer is Mentat blackmailing Claymore, seemingly just because he can. You gotta wonder what's up with that. But it does establish that yet another one of the League's leading "heroes" is as evil as any supervillain. Of the four we've seen so far, the best one is the self-centered, glory chasing jackal, Valour. We haven't yet met Dauntless in person, but given that he is the founder of this fundamentally corrupt organization, and the utter nastiness of his cohorts on the Tribunal, it's impossible to think he'll be any better when we finally do. I can hardly wait to see what comes next. Thank you Neon Demon!