Recent Comments

12/23/25, 4:18 PM
Looks like they won't be friends anymore when this is done
12/23/25, 10:06 AM
Omg this is literally the best story ever 😍 I'm so excited to become a dedicated reader and fan! Genius story and writing x
12/22/25, 7:24 PM
Freaking hot!
Anonymous
12/21/25, 11:14 AM
Thanks, great start!

DrA
12/22/25, 6:25 AM
@Anonymous :+1:
Anonymous
12/21/25, 12:17 PM
This was great! Forced jerking off his "clint" and taking Kevin's load in Grey's mouth then giving it back to Kevin in his own mouth - SO HOT!

DrA
12/22/25, 6:24 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! Hope u enjoy the rest too.
12/21/25, 4:00 PM
Hello, I have just read the three chapters you posted ... I could comment many things of the story and would probably be able to write a very detailed feedback about it, but I'll try to stick to the main ideas. There was a point a really reconsidered to keep reading and I'm -really- glad I did. I usualy read stories here to, let's be honnest, have a lot of fun. You are the second story I read (and gosh how many I have read), that actually really resonated with me as a person. It's only my opinion, but I really like the depth you managed to achieve with both characters, with so little writing (I mean it's not a 700 pages novel and yet you managed awesomely). Even with this fantasy bracelet idea (very cool by the way), you managed to make the story live in a way I find hard to describe with words. I want to deeply thank you for your work and I wish you never to feel pressured to write or post anything quickly. I hope that in the end, you will keep enjoy writing as much as I enjoyed your stories. Thank you also for the time you took to work on it, there must be a lot of things that, as a reader, I would not even think about, things you went through as a writer. (PS : I apologize if some phrasings sound awkward, french being my first language I still struggle sometimes, especially when I get a bit emotionnal).

12/21/25, 10:44 PM
@[DomslutinBriefs](/user/show/10062287) Hey! That’s just a really awesome thing to hear. I have wondered sometimes whether this story is the kind of thing for folks on this site. But I’m determined to see this story through to the end, and it’s so nice to hear that even just a few people have enjoyed it so far. I hope you can enjoy the upcoming chapters as much xxx
12/17/25, 8:49 AM
i normally love stories which center around a submissive's loss of control. Strangely enough even though i think this whole custom of creating non-consenting drones who remain aware of their unwanted and immoral treatment, the concept as a fantasy is still surprisingly somewhat arousing. While on the surface the loss of control is quite hot, it is interesting that for me the more immoral a story's concept, the less i enjoy the story and the less likely i am to come back to it. In my mind in a good BDSM relationship, both Dom and submissive, and even in the more extreme case of Master and slave(s), every participant must get something positive out of the relationship. In this case i see nothing positive for the drones at all for the rest of their lives. For me the sadness of this situation overrides my libido.

12/21/25, 5:37 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I agree
12/10/25, 1:41 AM
If you ever decide to write more, I'd love a chapter of turning the tables, giving some justice to Alan, freeing him again (and a payback for Oscar, though I can understand why he'd want to escape this fate). Then again, I'm a sucker for good endings, so that's just me

12/17/25, 8:51 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Interesting reaction. In my mind there was no 'good' ending to this story.

12/21/25, 5:36 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Because either way one of them becomes a drone?
Anonymous
12/21/25, 5:52 AM
I only wish that Archie can help and support his Jamie in the assimilation, conversion, and transformation. There has to be a happy ending for Jamie!
Toilet
12/21/25, 3:35 AM
Love to see slave serve as a full toilet can't lie. Piss drinker. Toilet paper. Shit eater. Would be a good punishment