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Dec 21, 2023
12/22/23, 3:30 AM
it's like an ode to bike riding more so than anything else. whatever the storyline is, you're losing me with the riding stuff.

Anonymous
12/22/23, 11:19 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) The cycling is used as a means of developing a one-ness of mind in the riders — the “drones” of their master’s. At the beginning of the novel, it’s important to see riding as a “safe space” for Eddie and how much he loves it. (Not to mention his spandex fetish.) I’ve done cycling stories before and yes, this one may be more technical, but it needed that taste of authenticity to work. Sorry you’re not into it.
Dec 21, 2023
12/21/23, 9:49 AM
I just downloaded and read the whole thing, and it's an amazing story. You took a very old pornographic theme--the harem story that shows up in a lot of Victorian erotica--and turned it into something that feels fresh and powerfully erotic.

12/21/23, 12:52 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I can't tell you how happy I am you liked it! When I set about plotting, I realized the expense of the Implant would limit the amount of transformations the reader would see, so it couldn't be a "take over the world" story -- not on its surface, anyway. Instead, I took the POV of the ingenue entering into an already corrupt world and discovering the danger piece by piece. For me, that felt very different, and I was concerned that it wouldn't grab the reader who wants "...and then the same thing happened to Bob".
Dec 21, 2023
Martin
12/21/23, 8:21 AM
Hi, I've edited the story to turn it into a proper "Sponsored Story" (on the submit/edit screen, there is a extra check button for Sponsored Stories which opens up a whole new set of additional properties when activated). Your story is now pinned for 10 days. You can also add an 'official' teaser text and the Amazon product ID, which will automatically create links to most international Amazon outlets. Please edit the story to add the teaser text (which is shown at the story's end in an extra box) and the correct ID. I tried to add the ID myself, but I couldn't find your book in the German Amazon store...

12/21/23, 12:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin. I'd been a sponsor for a while, but when it changed, I didn't realize I hadn't renewed with it. Glad to sponsor -- refer readers to this site a LOT! I'll search out the German link and send it to you.
Elm
12/20/23, 4:13 PM
Holy. Shit. I loved it!!😍
Anonymous
12/20/23, 1:22 PM
This was a great story, will you be writing any others?
Tay
12/20/23, 4:31 AM
DAMN this is a hot story! Can't wait to read all about a high school full of horny leather boys!
12/20/23, 2:04 AM
God this story is hot. Wish Jack could abuse me too.
12/18/23, 12:59 PM
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you craft in the finale, any chance you take requests?

12/19/23, 8:50 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Thank you! I am still very new to writing. This is the first story I've ever done, so I am not in a place where I can take a request to write a story. However, feel free to let me know what you wanted and I'll see if I can somehow incorporate it into a story in the future. If that's something you'd like.
Nck Rvrs
12/18/23, 11:21 PM
Damnnn too bad it takes long for this story to continue!! I love it so much!! I can’t get enough!!
Jul 13, 2022
12/18/23, 12:11 PM
Was this meant to be a oneshot or do you plan to develop it out as a series; would be fund to read more adventures of Aiden and Scott.