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Dec 21, 2023
12/31/23, 7:50 AM
I couldn't wait! I downloaded the whole story and had trouble putting it down. I love transformations in which either a character or relationships develop under some form of pressure or control. My strongest personal fetish involves some form of D/s seduction. I also like stories that end happily, though I also happily accept the occasional situation in which a really nasty evil unforgivable character gets his dire comeupance. Your story happily twisted all my norms around to the point where I finally thought I was the one to get the comeupance. Regardless of who did what to, with, and/or for whom, I think the story is incredibly hot and I expect I will read it again soon. The chapters you chose to represent the book worked well to represent the concept and fire up the imagination. Thanks so much for a wonderful read! [I found writing this comment a little tricky as I didn't want to give anything away to a new reader (other than the excitement to go buy the book), but still wanted to write something reasonably understandable to @absman420 and others who have read the whole book. Would love to chat more about the last chapter or two, but that might spoil the last twist.]

12/31/23, 1:11 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for this review -- please consider copy/pasting it over to Amazon! You've given me a chance to talk about form, which I love -- writer geek stuff ahead. THE IMPLANT is written in the form of a Five-Act Tragedy (ala Shakespeare etal) When I first conceptualized it, I "saw" the story as a three-act with an epilogue, but when I started writing, the 2nd Act just grew and grew until finally, I broke it into two separate acts -- so the work became a four-act with an epilogue, which didn't feel right to me, either, so I expanded the epilogue into a full act. Looking at the 5-act tragedy structure, the climax happens at the end of Act 3 (as mine did), falling action in Act 4 (which still implies forward motion, just fallout from the climax) and then Act 5, Tragedy, the horrific outcomes. I threw a little anti-climax into Act 4 -- just for fun -- but readers who are unused to the 5-Act form didn't understand that the end of Act 3 is the dramatic climax, not the end of Act 4, so they've felt "cheated" by the end of Act 4. I get that. If you ever read it again, read it with that in mind -- the fervor that got you to the end of the 3rd act (The Twin's Party and subsequent action) will hopefully read a little differently. Please feel free to DM on the Forum, or on Twitter or Threads to chat about the last few chapters.
mic
12/31/23, 12:34 PM
So Hot , nice stuffed full , love the hose and funel
Digital Dalliance
12/30/23, 10:59 PM
I want nothing but the best for Sammy. Thanks for the words.
Anonymous
12/30/23, 7:31 PM
Is Eli ever going to get any more action? John and Sammy are hot, but so is he.
12/30/23, 2:59 PM
Amazing! Master, I bow to your genius.
Zero
12/30/23, 1:53 PM
awww sweet, sexy and kinky at the same time. Love it. Looking forward to what comes next
hvt
12/30/23, 7:08 AM
So good! Love the crossover with the Stimle-verse too.

Anonymous
12/30/23, 7:09 AM
@[hvt](/user/show/909753) I’m a fan, I asked him if he minded

12/30/23, 7:29 AM
@Anonymous lol that was from me not logged in

12/30/23, 7:38 AM
@[hvt](/user/show/909753) Now I have to finish this chapter of Joaquin so I can work on THAT chapter! SO many ideas for this!
12/30/23, 5:41 AM
Love seeing the boys get more open and honest with each other. Love seeing Sammy begin to open himself up more and take steps towards being a more fully rounded healed person. And I'm endlessly impressed at how much emotion and character you cram into these stories.

12/30/23, 6:01 AM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thanks man, I try to make it different
12/30/23, 4:11 AM
How you keep making the story better amazes me. John, Eli, and Sammy are now the 3 musketeers. Jack, you are a genius. Thank you for sharing that genius with us.

12/30/23, 4:25 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks for reading!
12/29/23, 10:48 PM
Résultat de la traduction Dear reader, I'd like to apologize for having left you for too many months without any news, and especially without the sequel to my first story. I thank you all for congratulating me and encouraging me to continue. My life has taken an unexpected turn, which has greatly disrupted my writing, and even though a good part of Born's story is already written, I stalled on certain pivotal chapters. But then the desire to write returned, and so for the end of the year, I'm going to try to publish several chapters. I hope that this long waiting period hasn't put you off this story, and that you'll be tempted to read on, and that you'll enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Don't hesitate to leave comments, whether critical or enthusiastic. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as you move into the New Year. Happy Holidays