Recent Comments

12/30/23, 4:11 AM
How you keep making the story better amazes me. John, Eli, and Sammy are now the 3 musketeers. Jack, you are a genius. Thank you for sharing that genius with us.

12/30/23, 4:25 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks for reading!
12/29/23, 10:48 PM
Résultat de la traduction Dear reader, I'd like to apologize for having left you for too many months without any news, and especially without the sequel to my first story. I thank you all for congratulating me and encouraging me to continue. My life has taken an unexpected turn, which has greatly disrupted my writing, and even though a good part of Born's story is already written, I stalled on certain pivotal chapters. But then the desire to write returned, and so for the end of the year, I'm going to try to publish several chapters. I hope that this long waiting period hasn't put you off this story, and that you'll be tempted to read on, and that you'll enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Don't hesitate to leave comments, whether critical or enthusiastic. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as you move into the New Year. Happy Holidays
12/29/23, 10:47 PM
Résultat de la traduction Dear reader, I'd like to apologize for having left you for too many months without any news, and especially without the sequel to my first story. I thank you all for congratulating me and encouraging me to continue. My life has taken an unexpected turn, which has greatly disrupted my writing, and even though a good part of Born's story is already written, I stalled on certain pivotal chapters. But then the desire to write returned, and so for the end of the year, I'm going to try to publish several chapters. I hope that this long waiting period hasn't put you off this story, and that you'll be tempted to read on, and that you'll enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Don't hesitate to leave comments, whether critical or enthusiastic. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as you move into the New Year. Happy Holidays
Hurricane
12/29/23, 10:05 PM
Love this story and can't wait to see where it goes
12/29/23, 8:59 PM
This gets hotter and hotter!
12/29/23, 6:29 PM
I’d love to see the coach or even the dad lock the cumdump’s cock on a chastity cage and fuck him until he cums soft and untouched
12/22/23, 9:08 PM
Great use of contrasts to show how thoroughly Frank conquered Luke. The contrast between Luke’s and Frank’s bodies is expertly done along with the contrast between Luke’s humiliation and arousal. The suspense is also good. You keep us guessing as to how much of Frank’s power over Luke are natural and how much they are induced pharmaceutically (in the power of his cock) and hypnotically or pharmaceutically (in Frank’s power over Luke’s mind).

12/29/23, 8:12 AM
@[Evan14](/user/show/10043950) thanks! glad you enjoyed it. the final chapter is just waiting for approval. Hope you enjoy it too
12/29/23, 6:41 AM
getting better, bob is now truly under the influence of Jack and wants his dad to be another version of jack, when is his cloths going to change?
12/28/23, 2:53 PM
I really really liked the first part where, despite being his best friend, Chase just can't help to be aroused by his friend suffering. I love how he struggles between his friendship and how horny the situation makes him. I love it in stories when a loser is humiliated (bonus point if it's due to a misunderstanding or no fault of his own) and everyone around him get their rocks off, even his loved ones who should care about him. It's a very interesting world fantasy you've got there! Thank you for your work!
Anonymous
12/27/23, 6:26 AM
Hot, deeply intimate. Thanks for this

12/28/23, 12:10 AM
@Anonymous Thank you, appreciate)