Recent Comments

1/7/24, 10:10 PM
This is a very hot story and concept—I was reading it just to approve it at first, but it got hotter and hotter as time went on! I also appreciate your exploration of serious themes like toxic masculinity especially in the father relationship, and I approve of your coach's empathy for his students. Good shit! Oh, one other thing, I would suggest separating dialogue into more paragraphs—it's standard practice to have a new paragraph every time a new person is speaking. I found it hard to tell who was speaking in any given string of dialogue because it was all in one paragraph and there were few markers to tell me what words were being said by which person. The dialogue was definitely hot, though, and smooth!

1/7/24, 10:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) HI! Thank you so much for the comment. I see why all the fanfic writers were always so excited about getting them :sweat_smile: Like in the begining I didn't plan to have the step-dad play such a big role, but (SPOILER i guess) my fave trope is like revenge/role-reversal/small(er)-on-top kinda dynamic, and I wanted coach to stay the alpha, so someone had to take that place. As for the coach, I do myself prefer the caring type of domination to humiliation, so I wanted him to be such a figure. We'll have both of course - but the coach fantasy started all of this, so he'll probably be the carrier of my personal fantasies. Also thanks for the tip! I did think of that at some point, but was afraid of making the paragraphs too short, but i did go through the whole thing like 4 times, so i didn't even notice it wasn't clear - I added them after reading your comment, so it should be better now.
1/7/24, 2:38 PM
I feel like Josh deserves some wedgies for what he did to Karl, don’t you think? 🤭
1/5/24, 5:59 PM
Loving this story more and more . Hope spidey makes another appearance 🥵

1/6/24, 8:42 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) He will, but it might be a few chaps as we switch location yet again...

1/7/24, 10:41 AM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Very hot , good to know :-) I do love a spoiler so was wondering if there is a way to read the full story before they put on here ? Hehe

1/7/24, 2:06 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It's been posted in a few other places--mostly AO3 and FurAffinity. You can check my profile for link to those. However, I'll also say I'm touching the chapters up a bit as I post them here, so they'll be slightly improved if you wait. -;]
1/7/24, 3:53 AM
i love this saga so. never stop.
Jv
1/6/24, 1:57 PM
Update tonight?

Anonymous
1/7/24, 12:38 AM
@Jv I've sent an update but I guess I didn't realize it wasn't approved.
1/5/24, 6:16 PM
By far my favorite part. I love seeing how quickly and hard cap falls!

1/6/24, 8:43 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) No hero is immune to a good hypno-spanking, not even Captain America himself!
1/5/24, 11:57 PM
Please I need another chapter!
Anonymous
1/5/24, 10:27 PM
Lets see poor Adrien ravaged by his big brother and the guards,maybe?