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1/9/24, 5:23 PM
You’re doing such a fantastic job! I’m very exited to see more of Drew’s sph. I love how he was trying so hard to hide his caged nub from John. I feel like John would be perfect to give him a caged orgasm or something in the future. Keep up the great work.
1/9/24, 7:21 AM
This was hot and made me realize how much I missed these stories.
1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 7:12 AM
What an excellent first story. Hits so many notes for me. Very excited for more!

1/8/24, 10:50 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you! I'll try hitting (maybe even smashing) those notes some more ;)
1/8/24, 2:51 AM
Great first story! I’m more into the coach and loveeee scent / musk play! So I did enjoy the jockstrap and scent scenes. Coach seducing the dad of our jock and himself using his musk, and even players worshipping coach’s pits would be the hottest!

1/8/24, 10:48 AM
@[Obedient Beast](/user/show/901908) Hi! Glad you liked it! And if you liked coach and the scent play, you'll love what happens next. And oh ho ho, do I have plans for our step-dad. Admittedly, the way i currently outlined the story, we'll get there by chapter 8...but i'll make the wait good for you, don't worry :smirk:
1/8/24, 1:18 AM
Great story so far, very hot and overall well written! I like the side you've taken with the coach being sort of a softer dom type. Also think the classmate being someone he ends up with could be nice--maybe a similar dynamic where he's sort of an assertive daddy type energy in bed, but remains a cute goofball when doing other stuff? Hope you continue with this!

1/8/24, 10:41 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Very glad you like the coach, I have a lot of plans for him. Some things i missed a bit in the stories i read is after getting dommed, also being praised and cuddled and just have a bit of aftercare ya know. So there's definetly gonna be that as well. As for Dane, we'll see ;) Still not decided what exactly I want him to be like in the bed, but will try to keep it a bit different than it is with coach. Of course, writing chapter 2 right now.
1/8/24, 4:47 AM
Great chapter. Very interested in knowing the continuation with the story of daddy Bruce (with the participation of his handsome eldest son), Coach Jenkins and Cody (I really hope that Cody's father appears, a handsome redhead daddy is a great addition). Rich is a case aside: If Rich's family doesn't get together even at Christmas to be controlled, I don't know how Dexter will be able to gain access to his three brothers and his multimillionaire father. And I think this family deserves it's own chapter.
Jx
1/7/24, 10:45 AM
Great Chapter! can’t wait to see where it goes! So will the Christmas special be focused solely on Jimmy, Chad and Josh or will the other slaves be added to the queue?

1/7/24, 12:06 PM
@Jx That's a secret. :wink:

Jx
1/8/24, 4:37 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So when’s the next chapter of the holiday special?😉
1/7/24, 10:10 PM
This is a very hot story and concept—I was reading it just to approve it at first, but it got hotter and hotter as time went on! I also appreciate your exploration of serious themes like toxic masculinity especially in the father relationship, and I approve of your coach's empathy for his students. Good shit! Oh, one other thing, I would suggest separating dialogue into more paragraphs—it's standard practice to have a new paragraph every time a new person is speaking. I found it hard to tell who was speaking in any given string of dialogue because it was all in one paragraph and there were few markers to tell me what words were being said by which person. The dialogue was definitely hot, though, and smooth!

1/7/24, 10:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) HI! Thank you so much for the comment. I see why all the fanfic writers were always so excited about getting them :sweat_smile: Like in the begining I didn't plan to have the step-dad play such a big role, but (SPOILER i guess) my fave trope is like revenge/role-reversal/small(er)-on-top kinda dynamic, and I wanted coach to stay the alpha, so someone had to take that place. As for the coach, I do myself prefer the caring type of domination to humiliation, so I wanted him to be such a figure. We'll have both of course - but the coach fantasy started all of this, so he'll probably be the carrier of my personal fantasies. Also thanks for the tip! I did think of that at some point, but was afraid of making the paragraphs too short, but i did go through the whole thing like 4 times, so i didn't even notice it wasn't clear - I added them after reading your comment, so it should be better now.
1/7/24, 2:38 PM
I feel like Josh deserves some wedgies for what he did to Karl, don’t you think? 🤭