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1/8/24, 7:12 AM
What an excellent first story. Hits so many notes for me. Very excited for more!

1/8/24, 10:50 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you! I'll try hitting (maybe even smashing) those notes some more ;)
1/8/24, 2:51 AM
Great first story! I’m more into the coach and loveeee scent / musk play! So I did enjoy the jockstrap and scent scenes. Coach seducing the dad of our jock and himself using his musk, and even players worshipping coach’s pits would be the hottest!

1/8/24, 10:48 AM
@[Obedient Beast](/user/show/901908) Hi! Glad you liked it! And if you liked coach and the scent play, you'll love what happens next. And oh ho ho, do I have plans for our step-dad. Admittedly, the way i currently outlined the story, we'll get there by chapter 8...but i'll make the wait good for you, don't worry :smirk:
1/8/24, 1:18 AM
Great story so far, very hot and overall well written! I like the side you've taken with the coach being sort of a softer dom type. Also think the classmate being someone he ends up with could be nice--maybe a similar dynamic where he's sort of an assertive daddy type energy in bed, but remains a cute goofball when doing other stuff? Hope you continue with this!

1/8/24, 10:41 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Very glad you like the coach, I have a lot of plans for him. Some things i missed a bit in the stories i read is after getting dommed, also being praised and cuddled and just have a bit of aftercare ya know. So there's definetly gonna be that as well. As for Dane, we'll see ;) Still not decided what exactly I want him to be like in the bed, but will try to keep it a bit different than it is with coach. Of course, writing chapter 2 right now.
1/8/24, 4:47 AM
Great chapter. Very interested in knowing the continuation with the story of daddy Bruce (with the participation of his handsome eldest son), Coach Jenkins and Cody (I really hope that Cody's father appears, a handsome redhead daddy is a great addition). Rich is a case aside: If Rich's family doesn't get together even at Christmas to be controlled, I don't know how Dexter will be able to gain access to his three brothers and his multimillionaire father. And I think this family deserves it's own chapter.
Jx
1/7/24, 10:45 AM
Great Chapter! can’t wait to see where it goes! So will the Christmas special be focused solely on Jimmy, Chad and Josh or will the other slaves be added to the queue?

1/7/24, 12:06 PM
@Jx That's a secret. :wink:

Jx
1/8/24, 4:37 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So when’s the next chapter of the holiday special?😉
1/7/24, 10:10 PM
This is a very hot story and concept—I was reading it just to approve it at first, but it got hotter and hotter as time went on! I also appreciate your exploration of serious themes like toxic masculinity especially in the father relationship, and I approve of your coach's empathy for his students. Good shit! Oh, one other thing, I would suggest separating dialogue into more paragraphs—it's standard practice to have a new paragraph every time a new person is speaking. I found it hard to tell who was speaking in any given string of dialogue because it was all in one paragraph and there were few markers to tell me what words were being said by which person. The dialogue was definitely hot, though, and smooth!

1/7/24, 10:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) HI! Thank you so much for the comment. I see why all the fanfic writers were always so excited about getting them :sweat_smile: Like in the begining I didn't plan to have the step-dad play such a big role, but (SPOILER i guess) my fave trope is like revenge/role-reversal/small(er)-on-top kinda dynamic, and I wanted coach to stay the alpha, so someone had to take that place. As for the coach, I do myself prefer the caring type of domination to humiliation, so I wanted him to be such a figure. We'll have both of course - but the coach fantasy started all of this, so he'll probably be the carrier of my personal fantasies. Also thanks for the tip! I did think of that at some point, but was afraid of making the paragraphs too short, but i did go through the whole thing like 4 times, so i didn't even notice it wasn't clear - I added them after reading your comment, so it should be better now.
1/7/24, 2:38 PM
I feel like Josh deserves some wedgies for what he did to Karl, don’t you think? 🤭
1/5/24, 5:59 PM
Loving this story more and more . Hope spidey makes another appearance 🥵

1/6/24, 8:42 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) He will, but it might be a few chaps as we switch location yet again...

1/7/24, 10:41 AM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Very hot , good to know :-) I do love a spoiler so was wondering if there is a way to read the full story before they put on here ? Hehe

1/7/24, 2:06 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It's been posted in a few other places--mostly AO3 and FurAffinity. You can check my profile for link to those. However, I'll also say I'm touching the chapters up a bit as I post them here, so they'll be slightly improved if you wait. -;]
1/7/24, 3:53 AM
i love this saga so. never stop.