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1/12/24, 1:31 PM
I can’t wait for the next part!

1/12/24, 2:17 PM
@[Hypnocurious](/user/show/1798860) Thanks! I'll try to be fast 😁
Anonymous
1/11/24, 3:30 AM
Great story, enjoyed it a lot. I hope the main character gets to at some point. I would like to see Dane get topped by him or maybe a cute nerd or teacher.

1/12/24, 1:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, hey! Thanks for the comment. (SPOILER) but yeah, definetly have plans for Jace to do that as well. He'll be very subby in the beggining, but do already have plans for 4th or 5th chapter, depending how long the scenes before will take. His dom/sub, top/bot preferences will largly depend on the specific person he's having sex with, but even then it can change as their relationship grows.
AgentCoyner
1/10/24, 10:40 PM
As requested, letting you know I came to this story~ Excited to see more and hoping Jace gets his shot with Dane!

1/12/24, 1:44 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! Hope to keep hitting the right notes for you and for many more explosive reading ahead. <3
1/9/24, 3:33 AM
A day late, but just wanted to take the time to commend you for writing an effortful first submission! The juxtaposition between Jace's stepfather and Coach was a nice contrast and I'm looking forward to seeing how Jace's relationships develop - particularly between Coach and Dane. I would heed Soren's advise about the separation of dialogue between paragraphs, as you did a masterful job writing it and it would be a shame if it got lost in the reading. Keep writing and I can't wait to see more!

1/12/24, 1:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks! I'm also most excited about developing these specific relationships, between Jace with Coach and his stepfather. Wanted for him to have a diferent dynamic with each other character, so they truly feel different and wanted to have both extremes. There's gonna be more exposition and worldbuilding in the next two chapters, so then it will be a bit more clear where each path is going. Stay tuned!
1/12/24, 2:21 AM
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Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Palladium](/user/show/10033545) Rewards! 😍
Hinner
1/11/24, 9:14 PM
ID 1191188 I really like all the new stuff, especially the labyrinth! The events and the guys are so hot! I just wish getting a mythical was a little bit easier and didn't require thousands of battles even when shards are plenty available...

Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
1/12/24, 11:56 AM
Super super hot!
1/12/24, 6:54 AM
It took me a while to get into the characters of this story. I'm not certain that I ever did, but the writing grew stronger with each chapter. For a first post, this is a great one. I'd like to read more from you, DomNerd. Thanks for an unexpected New Year's gift.
1/12/24, 1:09 AM
Hehe, I am back. With a new story, as the last one even though I have a plot for it, I just don't know how to write it. So I decided to write a new story, maybe it will give me inspiration to get back to Atlantic Beasts. This series will follow an example of one of my favourite writers here @Tha Avnanizeis he is an amazing writer and I love all of his stories. Last year he wrote a chapter per day, without editing as it comes. I am not that good, so I will write whenever I have time. But it will be also without editing too much as it was the editing that slowed my progress with AB. I hope you like this series, this one is inspired by a lot of novels I read, so in my opinion it will be spicy, but maybe I have mild taste for most of you. we shall see. Stay safe Iriefall.
1/11/24, 4:53 AM
GH ID 1292865 Definitely enjoying gameplay so far, though I do wish there was a bit more instruction/detail on some of the Path of Valor/Glory requirements, such as a help pop-up to [re?] explain what is meant by "shards".

Gay Harem
1/11/24, 2:16 PM
@[AarrowOM](/user/show/13926) Shards is one of sources which characters could be one. I'll pass your feedback to our game design team, thank you! Rewards are here! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Martin
1/11/24, 6:36 PM
@[AarrowOM](/user/show/13926) To answer your questions: To activate an additional harem member, you need "shards", exactly 100 of them. So when you that number within the circle on a character you're haven't acquired yet, that's the number of "shards" you've alerady put into him.