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Island Jock
1/16/24, 9:49 PM
Great story, great writing! Tell me there’s gonna be more!
1/12/24, 7:19 PM
If this was it with no follow up chapters, it would still be the best I've ever read. I got so hard reading. Sahand's sweaty pits. Him having to lick them and in front of his father. Sahand texting the friend. I'd love for Sahand to administer a bare assed, over the knee spanking in front of the father and the (hopefully) former friend. Like Sahand said, a sissy can't be a bro. Sahand could be the guy's bro though and the former friend could love seeing Sahand putting the new bottom boy in his place. This was the hottest story thank you for posting it.

1/12/24, 10:11 PM
@[JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking](/user/show/10009399) Well if he becomes a fem boy or sissy and a Muslims sahand is not really gay … she is looking like good burka wearing wife in public so he can present him self pouldy to Ian Persian Muslim brothers after all she is just woman with over grown clit. Sahand and Azad could connect on the Muslim unbrinfinging and few on traditional Islamic relation ships now that he has become Sahand’s bride to be. After a shahada and circusion to make her clit less vile like a good Muslim cock she will make a good burka wearing Muslim wife like his mother was

1/16/24, 1:59 PM
@[GermanSeed](/user/show/2226126) :D
1/15/24, 8:49 PM
ID 1099323 here! I'm really, really enjoying the Labyrinth and the new guy sorting features! I wish there were also a filter for skill points. It can be tricky to see which guys already have them and which ones don't. It would also be nice to sort Hero Equipment by level, element, and slot! I tried to join the Gay Harem Discord server from the main page, but it seems like the link expired. Can you reshare it?

Gay Harem
1/16/24, 12:21 PM
@[eveningwill](/user/show/958518) Rewards! :star_struck: And the discord invite for Gay Harem - https://discord.gg/VqEnTus8hW
1/16/24, 6:17 AM
Hell yes! Great story. Keep going!!
Bobby Flay
1/16/24, 3:03 AM
poor Jamie, I wonder if he's had to suppress his feelings for Midnight all those years
1/15/24, 4:09 PM
This is an excellent story. My only complaint is chapter 3 was released a day after chapters 1 and 2 and here I am logging on the next day looking for chapter 4 and… sadness! Seriously though… excellent story!

1/15/24, 6:35 PM
@[Mstr4slvs](/user/show/908350) I added Chapter 1 one evening. next evening, I added chapter 2. But it takes some time to verify new series and chapters released. So it just came out as both of them being released at the same time. I will add chapter 4 probably today, but when it will be released, I don't know. I think tomorrow. About future releases, I will release in days I am off work, or if I stockpile chapters. I literally release everything I have. write a chapter, if I already did 1 chapter today, do it tomorrow, if not just send it. You can expect more soon. I have planned it till chapter 9 as for now, but hopefully more is comming.

1/16/24, 12:57 AM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) Take your time. No need to rush.
1/16/24, 12:14 AM
Just my kind of story. Really nice.
1/15/24, 10:07 PM
Awesome story. That captured my first submission to a freshman roomate perfectly. Jake is a wide open character...very approachable.
1/15/24, 9:24 PM
Absolutely great start! I really admire your ability to really get into the progression of a story. We've been introduced to the Neurobridge and received some trickles of how it works, really properly met our two main characters (who have really distinctive and unique voices, bravo), and been introduced to a few other characters who could become important later. The little hints of Jake's fantasies about how the Neurobridge could work were really great for keeping up the pace, and also worked really well for narrating his headspace during the actual D/s encounter. I'm excited to see more of this setting! I could keep talking about it for ages lol, but I'm sure you have a plan and I can't wait to see where you intend to go with it.

1/15/24, 10:06 PM
Thank you. Very high praise. I have written the 3 chapters I have planned for this, so I think I have added enough foreshadowing. Now, if I decide to go beyond 3 chapters, who knows? Also, I just want to say I love "[The Transformation of Albion.](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/476709)" A favorite of mine. Anyone who enjoys supernatural transformation should go check it out. Glad you are posting here again @[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663)
1/15/24, 5:34 PM
Man, this is a great piece of writing!!! I'm in awe of what you've put down. You've captured something I've been striving to get on the page: the beauty and emotional bond in the master-servant relationship. Just reading through Simon and Jacob taking their roles as Dom and sub and the relationship and the bond and trust displayed left me speechless. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this and I'll definitely be taking notes along the way.

1/15/24, 9:56 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you. I'm trying to express what a healthy D/s relationship would look like. Glad to hear it is connecting with you. Next chapter is more of their bond before we get into more of the Mind Control stuff.