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Hurricane
1/18/24, 7:39 PM
So good. Next chapter when? :smile:

1/18/24, 7:43 PM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Thanks H. Very shortly.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 7:11 PM
Holy fuck! This is insane. So fucking hot. Talk about thirsty. More please!

1/18/24, 7:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks A. Glad you enjoyed.
1/18/24, 3:20 PM
I loved this! Amazing, hit all my kinks! Hope there's more!

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thanks A7. More is on the way.
1/18/24, 5:48 AM
Oh yes, this is awesome. Can't wait for more.

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks man. Soon enough.
1/18/24, 5:07 AM
This is a great premise, but I would have found the story hotter if it spent more time on characterization at the beginning. We learn almost nothing about the guys' relationships or their normal personalities, so their transformation into part of the hive doesn't have much impact.

Anonymous
1/18/24, 2:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Good point, what if I start spreading it to "wanishing memories" when they become more and more pure alfas as being indoctrinated a re-programmed by their collective Hive mind as they fuse more and more to joint entity? For example when Jake lost his memory about family, still cares a big bead about his collective and is protective about Hive, Guardian protector Alfa. Other become seducing bitch Alfa, and you will see.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 1:30 AM
So I'm confused. Did Jake get "neurobridged"?

1/18/24, 1:33 PM
@Anonymous No, he didn't. He went on an date with Simon; Simon had Jake submit to him in the park; they went back to Simon's place together.
Anon
1/18/24, 9:02 AM
Absolutely loving this!! Can't wait to read more.
1/18/24, 1:40 AM
I love a good fantasy story with mind control… and an ongoing serial…. Swoon!
1/17/24, 3:24 PM
Just incredible. I'm breathless for more.
Ken
1/17/24, 1:10 PM
Hello, guys! You made a beautiful game. I've been playing it since november. I would like you to increase the chance to drop guys and their shards in: Epic Night Club, Tristan Hunter, Jimmy Durano. My ID: 4256. Have a happy and productive New Year!

Gay Harem
1/17/24, 1:50 PM
@[Ken](/user/show/10046749) Thank you! Happy new year to you as well and thank you for the feedback :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Rewards for you!