Recent Comments

1/17/24, 3:56 PM
id 15688 I've been coming back to the game since 2018. So much has changed. its been great to get into it again.

Gay Harem
1/19/24, 8:52 AM
@[Zangler](/user/show/10023153) Thank you for coming back! I've assigned you some rewards :blush:
Anonymous
1/18/24, 11:50 PM
It would be nice to see the archive and the stats and upgrades for his pets. There were some pretty interesting upgrade. Which could have great combinations.
1/18/24, 7:45 PM
Thanks for your comments guys. Very much appreciated. Please make sure you rate using the rating scores section. It's a blunt tool, but it helps every writer understand their work better. -JT.
Hurricane
1/18/24, 7:39 PM
So good. Next chapter when? :smile:

1/18/24, 7:43 PM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Thanks H. Very shortly.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 7:11 PM
Holy fuck! This is insane. So fucking hot. Talk about thirsty. More please!

1/18/24, 7:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks A. Glad you enjoyed.
1/18/24, 3:20 PM
I loved this! Amazing, hit all my kinks! Hope there's more!

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thanks A7. More is on the way.
1/18/24, 5:48 AM
Oh yes, this is awesome. Can't wait for more.

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks man. Soon enough.
1/18/24, 5:07 AM
This is a great premise, but I would have found the story hotter if it spent more time on characterization at the beginning. We learn almost nothing about the guys' relationships or their normal personalities, so their transformation into part of the hive doesn't have much impact.

Anonymous
1/18/24, 2:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Good point, what if I start spreading it to "wanishing memories" when they become more and more pure alfas as being indoctrinated a re-programmed by their collective Hive mind as they fuse more and more to joint entity? For example when Jake lost his memory about family, still cares a big bead about his collective and is protective about Hive, Guardian protector Alfa. Other become seducing bitch Alfa, and you will see.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 1:30 AM
So I'm confused. Did Jake get "neurobridged"?

1/18/24, 1:33 PM
@Anonymous No, he didn't. He went on an date with Simon; Simon had Jake submit to him in the park; they went back to Simon's place together.
Anon
1/18/24, 9:02 AM
Absolutely loving this!! Can't wait to read more.