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1/30/24, 4:56 PM
A genuinely well written, incredibly hot story. Very very much enjoyed it!
1/30/24, 12:01 AM
@Absman420 @ParadoxBear That makes sense. I was thinking back to the brothers spending their inheritance on becoming the Midwest distributor. But that was more of a cost like a franchise. Sales from the clothing line and websites/onlyfans probably pays for everything. I just figured taking over the world normally includes a monetary aspect unless you are an alien hiding in a plant.

1/30/24, 12:47 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) In some ways, this is a "Capitalism Gone Wrong" story -- like THE IMPLANT -- but that's not my angle. I'm just setting up reasonable fantasy parameters for a muscle-growth story. When you analyze these stories too closely, they tend to fall apart.

1/30/24, 4:51 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) To paraphrase a certain TV show... "It's just a story, I should really just relax!"
Martin
1/30/24, 7:40 AM
Das ist wirklich ein schönes und sehr einfühlsames Kapitel!

1/30/24, 4:20 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) For those getting an error by accessing the story: It will be published on March 7th 2024. Stay tuned

Arcturus
1/30/24, 4:48 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you very much for your friendly comment. We Hope, that you enjoy the next chapters as well Arcturus
1/30/24, 4:02 PM
You leave me speechless. This Chapter was one I was struggling a lot. So much more I feel honored by your comment. And your comment motivates for a (few?) next chapter(s). To all readers: please write your thoughts of this "fantasy". BTW: Tomorrow you all can see, what would happen, if the descission is to contimue as "part-time slave".
Martin
1/30/24, 2:15 PM
Now I can finally comment this! This story is starting really promising. It's not hitting my kink button perfectly, but I'm still affected very much. I'm curious as for how you gonna develop this. I'd add "consensual non-consent" as a tag, as this is exactly what that tag is about. I like to read such a total power exchange story which is really consensual and not based on kidnapping or any other kind of act of force.
1/30/24, 12:30 AM
Oh my oh my oh my oh my!! Gdhdndhrfdg Do fucking good! Everything about this was amazing! So good! Great plot, great porn, great sex, great end. So good! So sexy.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:13 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I hear you. This is one amazingly hot and cum-inducing story, well written, great concept, and prefect execution!
1/30/24, 2:42 AM
@Martin, I guess you mean January 30 in European time because it's January 29 in the States and I just finished reading this leg of the story. I like this ending. It's not an overwhelming change in Dan and Taylor; it's more Inception style without the whole depression. And all three being Simon's jockboys just comes gradually. It's really nice to see a story where the mind control doesn't dominate but comes on gradually and there is an acceptance of the control. And you left room for the story to go in different directions. Thank you for writing this story.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:12 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) The intricacies of time zones :) The system always shows a timestamp adjusted for your local time zone. So I'm always talking MET :)
1/30/24, 4:56 AM
4 stars
1/30/24, 4:14 AM
Great finale! You're right in your comment to Martin: this ending is pretty clearly signposted, but no less hot for it! The fact that all the jockboys end up being a hivemind at the end is very sexy, and you do a great job showing them absorb Jake's personality during the orgy scene. Too bad I don't know any hot nerds who can mindfuck me into submission.
1/30/24, 2:22 AM
The ending was even better than I dreamed. Glad the time zones allowed this to appear Monday night instead of Tuesday. Yay! And why isn’t this in the running for Mad Science?

1/30/24, 3:34 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I thought about putting this in mad science, but really only the last chapter fits with the contest, imho. And I started posting the story before the contest started. I don’t think you can put a later chapter of a story in a contest, since it wouldn’t be fair for the anonymous judging. Think of this as your Mad Science appetizer before the contest. 😃

1/30/24, 4:04 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yeah, I get it. But this is one hell of an appetizer ! Just about the best series I’ve read here in a long time.