Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/2/24, 3:17 AM
te hace falta Jesús en tu vida kekekekekeke
2/1/24, 10:30 PM
I really liked the 1st POV of it but i kind of agree with CRW, there was a bit much of the backstory of him being military. Also, theres not alot of plant based transformation/combination, so thats exciting. I hope we get more of it because theres so many places this story could go. He could meet the other missing people. It could be what happens next, and how they recruit more. A different POV. So yeah, hope theres more update to this.
Sam
2/1/24, 10:15 PM
damn, i don't think i've ever jacked off to something as creepy as this. bravo
Anonymous
2/1/24, 8:59 PM
very sexy 💦
CRH
2/1/24, 8:11 PM
i loved the transformation
2/1/24, 8:06 PM
Creepy and hot. I hope you plan to continue.
CRW
2/1/24, 7:52 PM
I disagree with the other guy. I have no clue why they find the narrator unreliable. I don't get that at all. Anyway, I like the first-person POV. It's unique and stands out among the other stories in this group. Plant transformation is uncommon, but idk if it's that original. The grafting concept does elevate the originality. The transformation was descriptively described. My only critique is that it skews heavy on the backstory and less balanced toward the freaky stuff, which is what I'm here to read.
2/1/24, 6:00 PM
It... It needs a bit more polish tbh. Personally, I think it should have leaned more on the unreliable narrator trope but that's just me. There are some parts that don't flow as well but the concepts are there.
2/1/24, 1:43 PM
THe description of that bedroom... the mirror on the ceiling. Watching himself while Mr Franks enjoyed the young man... OMGosh. MAGIC
Anonymous
2/1/24, 9:56 AM
that was so good. been wanting a story of an alpha who is a cockhungry slut. idk when but i hope you do an origin story for the alpha.