Recent Comments

2/1/24, 8:06 PM
Creepy and hot. I hope you plan to continue.
CRW
2/1/24, 7:52 PM
I disagree with the other guy. I have no clue why they find the narrator unreliable. I don't get that at all. Anyway, I like the first-person POV. It's unique and stands out among the other stories in this group. Plant transformation is uncommon, but idk if it's that original. The grafting concept does elevate the originality. The transformation was descriptively described. My only critique is that it skews heavy on the backstory and less balanced toward the freaky stuff, which is what I'm here to read.
2/1/24, 6:00 PM
It... It needs a bit more polish tbh. Personally, I think it should have leaned more on the unreliable narrator trope but that's just me. There are some parts that don't flow as well but the concepts are there.
2/1/24, 1:43 PM
THe description of that bedroom... the mirror on the ceiling. Watching himself while Mr Franks enjoyed the young man... OMGosh. MAGIC
Anonymous
2/1/24, 9:56 AM
that was so good. been wanting a story of an alpha who is a cockhungry slut. idk when but i hope you do an origin story for the alpha.
2/1/24, 12:57 AM
Super hot dude! Made me hard. I'd be interested in reading more of your writing ;)
1/31/24, 11:41 PM
A very hot story. Spoiler: They all seemed to want to be jock boys by the end. The change in their brains was sudden but spread slowly to their entire minds.
1/31/24, 6:30 PM
This was an amazing story. So much work into this and it was well worth the read. Enjoyed the pacing and had just a bit of everything I like in a story.
11/13/22, 10:12 AM
Being ignorant of German language, I rely on Google Translate, which is ok except that it translates "Dom" as "cathedral"! I hope that you are able to continue and complete this excellent story. Da ich der deutschen Sprache nicht mächtig bin, verlasse ich mich auf Google Translate, was in Ordnung ist, außer dass es "Dom" als "Kathedrale" übersetzt! Ich hoffe, dass Sie diese hervorragende Geschichte fortsetzen und vervollständigen können.

1/31/24, 5:17 PM
@[chasedboi](/user/show/910645) Agreed, great story even with the infelicities of Google translate. (In addition to cathedral for Dom, it completely flunks Schwanz and on occasion puts in an inappropriately feminine pronoun!)
1/31/24, 7:57 AM
Thanks for this great puppy experience! I did have a sweet and loyal dog growing up, and the feelings are still warm and deep. Other than a very general familiarity with puppy play, I have no real knowledge or experience. Still, I definitely see the attraction.