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12/13/23, 3:33 AM
Two amazing chapters and then back to the waiting? You're so mean! And these comments are to both chapters. Reading how and when Midnight became a drone was a great flashback. How it transpired and why. Though what ultimately became of Minotaur? Was he released and forced to resign in shame and ridicule? Did he become a drone? Mentat has definitely proven that he is just as borderline diabolic as the rest of the tribunal. He is just more underhanded and manipulative about it. Though it is an interesting parallels to how he works with secrets and how Master Myriad does. Kane is about to find a lot of gratification and recognition with his new 'handlers'. He clearly is after these from his current superiors as isn't getting what he is after. Yet know after the 'cuddles' and the ring, I'm very confident he is about to switch sides willingly. Would be become some type of rubber hound for Master while being a DS because of his fetish though? Plus the whole scene with the twins was a hawt read. How they wrecked Kane, and then Onyx getting caught up into it too. Fun times with that. And I am very confident that my previous thoughts on Jamie's powers are correct. I am pretty certain how his powers revolve around some form of energy manipulation. And energy can be in so many forms and with so many uses, it explains his time at the gym. And his stunt as the mystery hero a couple chapters back. Though with these really productive gym sessions, is Jamie going to be putting on some new muscle as he utilizes these powers he doesn't know he has? It was quite as stark difference for Dusk between the flashback and his interactions with Master on the roof. Its almost like two different people. Though his feelings for Jamie is definitely going to keep playing in this story. And Jamie's to him. Its quite warming to read. I love how these chapters are progressing and your commitment to them. So well done! I already want the next 5 chapters.

12/13/23, 5:28 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) What became of Minotaur? I imagine we'll find out. Yep. Mentat is a grade A PoS. Nah. Kane may get or be brought there eventually, but he's very heavily imbued with the League's propaganda. Also, I think the point of the ring is to influence/move him without him being aware of it. Even he doesn't know he's now basically a DU, and it'll stay that way for a while. Good guess on Jamie's powers. It definitely is trending in that direction, and I agree. But since he's using his powers to lift the heavy weight, I don't think the lifting will add much muscle. The latex and other treatments available to Master may add a lot, however. The story has suggested as much. Dusk now versus Midnight/Archie then. It illustrates what merger with the symbiote does when the dronification reaches its culmination. Plus, he's probably undergone a fair amount of conditioning between then and now. I hope we get to see what his "reconditioning" looks like. And yeah, his feelings about Jamie will almost certainly play into what's to come. I also want the next five chapters, though I hope Jamie is Daybreaker by the time we finish Chapter 10 or 11.

12/13/23, 2:01 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Minotaur has only been mentioned in passing. It sounds like he was made a drone. It would be another great flashpoint for both Archie and Minotaur to see how it all concluded. You are right about Kane being deeply ingrained said propaganda. Yet, he has proven over multiple chapters that wants to prove he is capable, reliable, and wants to be of greater use. Such as his interactions with Valour and Mentat. While simultaneously rejecting what he is drawn too: his musk fetish. Now that he is being linked up as he is now, he has the opportunity to get both. As he begins to do things for Myriad or Onyx, he is going to be rewarded. Either in pleasure or being pampered that he was doing a good job or both. And the musk can be a treat for him. But that is speculative. If Myriad wants these supers to come willingly, than Kane needs to understand what he is doing and willingly. I agree that the when Jamie is fully daybreak, he will get some more mass. And seems he already has when he was the mystery hero a couple chapters back. Really pairs well with powers like his to not have a body that matches. Though I suspect he will not become daybreak fully until around chapter 12-13 at least. I wouldn't be surprised if Kane becomes a drone before him. And I am definitely interested in that 'reconditioning' too. I really hope for details on what that is like.

1/15/24, 8:47 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thought I'd comment more on Midnight/Archie then (Chapter 8) vs 05/Dusk now because the two contrasting sequences were so well crafted. Feel free to comment back. What we're seeing is the difference in persective between Archie as a still free man and Archie as Master's 05/Dusk - a fully realized drone, with the man and symbiote one fully merged entity.. The Archie before could view Master objectively and conclude that he was mad. He might call and think of the man as "Master", but it was just a name. He was probably free to leave, but in any case he still had agency and choice, enough that he dared to try and extract a huge promise from Master, and got it. 05/Dusk has truly been "realigned". Master is no longer a name, but a genuine title and role. When he tries to avoid thinking of that title, the alternative he uses is "owner". That speaks volumes - he genuinely sees himself as property. That is who and what 05/Dusk/Archie is nowadays, and except in the worst moments of his backlash he doesn't see anything negative about that. Indeed, in his confrontation with Master, he glories in being Master's slave and puppet. Clearly 05/Dusk is still able to act in a way he knows Master will disapprove of, but he feels guilty and fearful while doing it, enough that he is trying to think of ways to temper Master's wrath. And when confronted by Master, he is immediately contrite. And his view of Master is of a person much more intelligent, knowledgeable, far seeing, and powerful than he is, one far above his own lowly status. So yeah, Archie is still there, but 05 and Dusk are who he is now, an owned drone slave whose mind and thought processes have been realigned to be what his Master and owner wants them to be. Master really does own his body, mind, and soul.

1/29/24, 2:15 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Actually, I fully agree with this insight to the characters. Well thought out and well said.

2/13/24, 1:21 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks, Marik!
2/12/24, 8:39 PM
Help…….need………more……
2/12/24, 8:53 AM
Nice work man, that was awesome! Love a good corruption and role reversal!
2/12/24, 4:07 AM
So freaking hot!
Nodarao
2/12/24, 2:06 AM
Oh an epilogue would be so fun! I want to see what/who the drone is re-built into, and what happens to the doctor.
2/11/24, 7:38 PM
You’re welcome. And I loved all the transformations. Particularly Daddy & Boy. Glad they were happy with their new selves. You could make a whole series on just them. Lol. I’m also curious about what happens to the Doctor. I mean, they can’t just leave him standing in the corner of the shop, right? And you know, as “good” as the AI is, once it’s exposed itself fully to the full World Wide Web of depravity who knows what will happen? ** insert evil laugh here **
2/11/24, 5:54 PM
Excellent, but I still feel there’s a little more here. An epilogue maybe? Like what does the AI do out in the wild? Or how does the hypnotist fare managing the rubber shop, etc? And does the drone regain some humanity or does it embrace it’s new existence? Regardless, just about the hottest story here in a while. Kudos!

2/11/24, 6:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks, my friend! I really appreciate the encouragement. This chapter was the most fun to write out of all of them, but I felt like it was just getting less kinky and wank-worthy as I went. But I had this idea of how I wanted all the characters to develop and felt obligated to see it through, even if it turned out to be a flop. Originally, chapter 1 was meant to just be a stand-alone story. Then I got Covid and got stuck at home for the week, and spent the time integrating other ideas I had floating around in my head into this world. Honestly, chapter 2 is my personal favorite, but I’m here for transformation, not the actual sex. That story does something dirty to me. I reread it over and over again for editing, and still got horned up every time. 3 and 4 were a blast, and I’m glad everyone seems to enjoy them. All the first four chapters are like little windows into the secret, kinky parts of my mind. And who knows. There could be an epilogue. I was getting so sleepy last night, I finally had to call it quits on #5 before I just started typing gibberish. After the competition ends, I may even open this up as a community series. I think it would be hot to see what happens if some of the really great authors on this site decided to play with my toys. But thanks again. I really hope everyone has as much fun reading these as I did writing them. Keep it kinky, -The Author
Hunter
2/11/24, 3:48 PM
God yes I love all your stories so much!!!!
2/11/24, 12:54 AM
Boy, what kind of HOT story.........getting me started all over to get back into RUBBER........... really hope, you're writing more of these ;-)
T
2/10/24, 11:57 PM
I can’t hardly wait for the next installment. The slow build is phenomenal.