Recent Comments

2/17/24, 9:27 AM
Loving the story so far! Can't wait for the new recruits to change, especially the cocky Christian. All the stuff with agents Smith and Wesson in this chapter was especially hot.

2/17/24, 12:24 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'm glad you're enjoying it. So far, it's made me realize how much of a novelist I've become, in terms of taking my time with development and plot. In the original series, they were taking the shots in the first chapter, here we had to get all the way to chapter five (for the primer)! The Smith & Wesson bit might have been a little gratuitous, but it does illustrate a plot-point for later on. (See? A novelist...) Honestly, it wasn't until I realized what to do with Little Budd that this whole thing came together in my head. I've stayed away from doing a sequel to the original story because I didn't know how to utilize the brothers. I knew Big Budd would become "Big Daddy" but Little Budd's future role was never clear. Now it is. I enjoy writing Christian -- Keywon, too, now that I've figured out his voice. And once I gave Smokey a Philly accent, the whole character made sense to me.

2/22/24, 6:57 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Keywon was solid bit.

2/22/24, 11:37 AM
@[Darmani](/user/show/138470) Keywon’s turning out to be a cool character to work with. I always hesitate when writing a person of color, but I’m playing with convention as I do, allowing Keywon to comment on his own situation. It’s oddly meta, but the character rings true.
Anonymous
2/22/24, 10:28 AM
Hot.
2/22/24, 8:19 AM
What a brilliant story, not normally one I would read. Let is be a lesson to anyone who calls door-to-door!
2/22/24, 7:32 AM
Will we get back stories to the other demon boys?
2/22/24, 6:53 AM
loved this story always good to read about high and mighty Mormons get corrupted, would like to read more :smiling_imp:
2/21/24, 10:56 PM
Excellent story! Please write more
2/21/24, 9:01 PM
Bring on another chapter! Maybe a father of one of the young men comes looking for them and is turned by his own son. Whatever you do, make it dark and twisted!
R P
2/21/24, 4:54 AM
Super hot setup! Can’t wait to to see Eric taken down 😈
Frank
2/19/24, 12:57 AM
WOW… your command of the appropriate words without ever turning to cliches is amazing! The way you build the story and take us slowly, luxuriously, into the moment and the feelings, is fucking ART! I can and will read you over and over again because it’s so good! I’ve only read a couple of great writers here that can blend both the concept and the mood and the right amount of reality and eroticism, you are at the TOP of your game! I hope you feel it and keep writing… I’m hooked!

2/20/24, 2:11 PM
@Frank Thanks Chief. Glad to hear my world has rocked yours. There's more to come....much more. -JT
Subby Tubby
2/3/24, 3:15 AM
Mere joy in written form giving visual imagery! Cannot wait for the Alpha to return from His weekend away. To have His best buddy over for a Guy's Night watching a game being served by the faggot nude with a clit cage and apron on. After several beers becoming the urinal which introduces the first servitude to the buddy. Afterall, what Alpha doesn't want to show His power by presenting a display of it... The final stage - the faggot moving in as the final chapter into its "room" in the corner of the garage and 24/7 availability with total servitude of ownership even a glory hole for His buddies to drop over day or night! My mind just goes like this! So vivid is your imagination as a writer so inspiring...

2/20/24, 2:10 PM
@Subby Tubby Glad you enjoyed it. More on the way.