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2/23/24, 5:57 AM
Some very hot scenes, especially the one with Smokey, Christian, and Keywon. I'm just a little disappointed that Christian isn't putting up more resistance; for me, these types of stories are always hotter when you have a few guys resisting the transformation even as their friends and peers give in.

2/23/24, 12:45 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Poor persecuted Christian. Have faith, Chapter 6 will give you more of what you're looking for!
2/23/24, 12:25 AM
A very hot next chapter!

2/23/24, 12:30 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) <----- (Curtsies.)
2/23/24, 11:36 AM
Damn. The Parker Slutomatic Universe just keeps getting better.
2/23/24, 11:04 AM
> “Don’t be nervous,” Dr. Troy said as he grabbed Rodney’s balls firmly – he could feel the cool muzzle of the gun press against his skin. “You’re starting out in a good place. These are nice balls, kid – they’re gonna be spectacular! Hell, yours will be transformative!”> We got some foreshadowing. Sounds like Rodney will be pressing his transformative gun against prostates instead of balls. Don't know if our beloved author can let Christian resist too much. If he freaks out too much then he would flee. Beating off is one thing. After the next dose when the others start fucking we'll probably see him panic. Christian may turn and run. Right into a wall of muscle and cock that is Big Budd. Fingers crossed or in this case swords.
2/17/24, 9:27 AM
Loving the story so far! Can't wait for the new recruits to change, especially the cocky Christian. All the stuff with agents Smith and Wesson in this chapter was especially hot.

2/17/24, 12:24 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'm glad you're enjoying it. So far, it's made me realize how much of a novelist I've become, in terms of taking my time with development and plot. In the original series, they were taking the shots in the first chapter, here we had to get all the way to chapter five (for the primer)! The Smith & Wesson bit might have been a little gratuitous, but it does illustrate a plot-point for later on. (See? A novelist...) Honestly, it wasn't until I realized what to do with Little Budd that this whole thing came together in my head. I've stayed away from doing a sequel to the original story because I didn't know how to utilize the brothers. I knew Big Budd would become "Big Daddy" but Little Budd's future role was never clear. Now it is. I enjoy writing Christian -- Keywon, too, now that I've figured out his voice. And once I gave Smokey a Philly accent, the whole character made sense to me.

2/22/24, 6:57 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Keywon was solid bit.

2/22/24, 11:37 AM
@[Darmani](/user/show/138470) Keywon’s turning out to be a cool character to work with. I always hesitate when writing a person of color, but I’m playing with convention as I do, allowing Keywon to comment on his own situation. It’s oddly meta, but the character rings true.
Anonymous
2/22/24, 10:28 AM
Hot.
2/22/24, 8:19 AM
What a brilliant story, not normally one I would read. Let is be a lesson to anyone who calls door-to-door!
2/22/24, 7:32 AM
Will we get back stories to the other demon boys?
2/22/24, 6:53 AM
loved this story always good to read about high and mighty Mormons get corrupted, would like to read more :smiling_imp:
2/21/24, 10:56 PM
Excellent story! Please write more