Recent Comments

5/13/24, 5:16 AM
Unique and detailed. Excited for more.

5/15/24, 8:03 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you, I am trying to my best on writing it out and making sure that it catches the readers attention!
5/15/24, 3:26 AM
Yes!!! This is the chapter I was most excited about!! I can't wait for the next one.
May 14, 2024
Anonymous
5/15/24, 1:50 AM
please continue!!!

Fred
5/15/24, 1:53 AM
@Anonymous Maybe? Dunno, seems kind of done, but I have other stories!
May 14, 2024
5/15/24, 1:06 AM
Great story. Loved it!

Fred
5/15/24, 1:53 AM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks!
May 14, 2024
GaySkull
5/15/24, 12:36 AM
Fuck I...I need to send.

Fred
5/15/24, 1:53 AM
@GaySkull Glad you liked it!
xo
5/15/24, 12:57 AM
So hot omg
5/14/24, 9:41 PM
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
5/14/24, 5:08 PM
Glad you enjoyed the series of two episodes, Antnee. Thanks for letting me know.
5/14/24, 3:44 PM
The induction is excellent, but risks being repetitive without action. And, please, Mancini (an Italian surname); Manccini is a mistake.

5/14/24, 4:14 PM
@[clami](/user/show/910227) ManCCini may be a mistake in Italy, but many surnames have changed in Brazil and this surname exists in Brazil. But this is a work of fiction, so the important thing is to maintain verisimilitude and not a copy of reality. But thanks for the tip, it's noted.