Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/18/24, 12:44 AM
gotta love the green goop and all it transforms… another hot chapter!!!
Anonymous
3/17/24, 11:11 PM
hot!!!
3/17/24, 8:19 PM
I have to admit Eden's admission pitch leaves something to be desired.
3/17/24, 3:54 PM
Liked how you brought back the classic Gunnar character from previous classic Superman stories. Especially enjoyed when Gunnar & Jason worked together to bring Lex into the mix on facefuck blowjob with Supes! Also, enjoyed the comic twist at the end with Jason-- can't wait to see how Lex gets himself out of this jam!
3/17/24, 7:16 AM
Great story! Would love to see more!
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
3/14/24, 5:18 PM
Are you fucking kidding me? Another ball out of the park! So smoldering at the front and fevered at the back. Nice job buddy!

3/14/24, 5:24 PM
@[StrongDom](/user/show/10048249) Thanks SD! Glad you are enjoying my work.

3/15/24, 11:34 PM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) Am I ever. You so get it.

3/16/24, 5:29 PM
@[StrongDom](/user/show/10048249) Thanks SD. I really appreciate when you guys reach out to tell me you like my writing.
3/16/24, 4:47 PM
You manage to continue to create new twists to this ongoing story....Keep it intense & twisted!
3/16/24, 12:45 PM
Jack! You have done it again. Anxious to learn more about Johnny Football and his subservience
Anonymous
3/16/24, 1:19 AM
mmm… CUM-union… plus loved the ending of this chapter… can’t wait to see what happens to Rodney and his dad next!!!

3/16/24, 1:29 AM
@Anonymous Re: CUM-union. Can I confess to trying to get as many Christian puns as I can into the manuscript? Forgive me. It’s a sickness. As for the subplots, I’m honing them down. Right now there’s less than ten. I think. I might even tie it all up in one big bow. Let’s see…

Anonymous
3/16/24, 2:32 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) do NOT apologise for any of your writing… it is another brilliant chapter… and I’m all for the puns… love the various sub plots… the more the merrier (I say that not the one having to write them)… they stand by themselves and together… Smoky and Greg was insanely hot… overall magnificent!!!

3/16/24, 10:50 AM
@Anonymous I’ve always been a subplot whore, and I can juggle quite a number. Often times, it’s the subplots that give us forward motion. Coming into this story, I “knew” the senator plot (since changed) and the six new characters. I didn’t know what I was going to do with the Budds until I did it. Now it’s become my favorite part.