Recent Comments

3/19/24, 1:31 AM
"I'm going to go shower". I have a feeling that disclosing that fact might turn out to be.. a mistake. Next chapter spicey in a new way, perhaps?
2/15/24, 9:11 AM
The way scent is driving him into need and his body changing to crave being filled with cum is really fun to watch. The exposition of lore is welcome and sprinkled in enough to get a sense of what's happening. Dane is sweet, I hope they get to spend more time together the three of them. It is such a shame our hero's change is happening so fast. I think he'd love being opened up by a lot of beta cocks to prepare for the monster Alpha coach is sporting. That the Alpha loses his senses and goes into rut is very hot too. Look forward to the next chapter.

3/18/24, 8:30 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for the comment! It's nice to get some feedback and know what I'm doing right :grin:. I did want the first scenes to feel more intimate and personal and not just thurst a bunch of never-before-mentioned dicks in the mix (tho lemme tell you I was tempted). Still, I do have plans for someone to be opened up by a lot of cocks ;)

3/19/24, 1:21 AM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) I think you achieved this. It's nice to get more of a connection to the other dicks coming in. ;) Mmm, your plan to have someone opened up by a lot of cocks is all the more reason to eagerly anticipate another chapter when it's ready. I was already excited!
3/1/24, 3:15 PM
I am a NUT about the smells of men and ... this is such great storytelling. THANK YOU

3/18/24, 8:34 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much! :heart_eyes:
2/19/24, 7:21 PM
I am Aching for the next chapter that was amazing. Well done. Hungry for more but please take as much time as you need.

3/18/24, 8:33 PM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) Glad to hear it :grin: As you can see I am indeed taking my time, but worry not, next chapter will come out...not sure when, but it will
2/17/24, 10:22 PM
Damn incredible

3/18/24, 8:31 PM
@[ChickenTenders](/user/show/10000783) Thank you! :purple_heart:
2/17/24, 1:28 AM
This is so freaking good, and the pacing is fantastic!! 🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆

3/18/24, 8:31 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
2/14/24, 2:10 AM
I felt like I was getting just as teased throughout the workout scene as Jace was! I get the feeling that a Dane/Jace scene is building up, and I'm really looking forward to it! Also looking forward to seeing how Coach is going to continue helping Jace through his first time in Heat! ;)

3/18/24, 8:25 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Gosh, love getting comments like this. Yeah these two chapters have been all about the teasing and the build up, but we're getting to the main show soon. Definetly have plans for Dane, but Jace will want to take this slow (...relatively), so stick around ;) Yeah, honestly I'm really looking forward to writing the scene with Coach. Hope you'll like it!
2/13/24, 11:24 PM
Can't wait for part 3!

3/18/24, 8:16 PM
@[Anthrowolfdude](/user/show/913869) You and me both :rofl: (but, to be serious, I am finally working on it again). Thanks!
2/13/24, 9:06 AM
So very hot, I’m really looking forward to more. And very happy to proofread stuff if you’d like me to

3/18/24, 8:15 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Hey, thank you! That's great, I'll send you the link in your PMs when I get to that point, and if you'll have the time I will be very happy!
2/13/24, 5:23 AM
That was incredible. So excited for more.

3/18/24, 8:13 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks! Had to take a bit of a break, but I'm working on it now, even if it's going a bit slow.