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3/20/24, 10:26 PM
So, so good.

3/21/24, 2:58 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you!
3/19/24, 7:31 PM
I hope this two doesnt find a loophole and screw over John. But keep the spiciness coming.

3/21/24, 2:58 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) No loopholes planned at the moment, John's plans for them have just begun! I'm having some slight technical difficulties with my phone at the moment so that may delay the next chapter. Stay tuned!
3/21/24, 6:54 AM
I have to say, I am not generally a big fan of the superhero/villain genre, but you bring an enthralling Dominant/submissive-Master/slave power exchange vibe to it that makes it super hot and super magical!
Nick Rvrs
3/19/24, 10:57 PM
LOVEEEE ITTTT

3/20/24, 3:00 PM
@Nick Rvrs Thanks Nick!
Anonymous
3/20/24, 11:42 AM
No loopholes please keep torturing them!! If they end up getting the phone please make them end up being forced to torture themselves!! Can’t wait for the next chapter
3/20/24, 4:22 AM
I hope you write more chapters of this story. This is such a great story.
3/19/24, 1:31 AM
"I'm going to go shower". I have a feeling that disclosing that fact might turn out to be.. a mistake. Next chapter spicey in a new way, perhaps?
2/15/24, 9:11 AM
The way scent is driving him into need and his body changing to crave being filled with cum is really fun to watch. The exposition of lore is welcome and sprinkled in enough to get a sense of what's happening. Dane is sweet, I hope they get to spend more time together the three of them. It is such a shame our hero's change is happening so fast. I think he'd love being opened up by a lot of beta cocks to prepare for the monster Alpha coach is sporting. That the Alpha loses his senses and goes into rut is very hot too. Look forward to the next chapter.

3/18/24, 8:30 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for the comment! It's nice to get some feedback and know what I'm doing right :grin:. I did want the first scenes to feel more intimate and personal and not just thurst a bunch of never-before-mentioned dicks in the mix (tho lemme tell you I was tempted). Still, I do have plans for someone to be opened up by a lot of cocks ;)

3/19/24, 1:21 AM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) I think you achieved this. It's nice to get more of a connection to the other dicks coming in. ;) Mmm, your plan to have someone opened up by a lot of cocks is all the more reason to eagerly anticipate another chapter when it's ready. I was already excited!
3/1/24, 3:15 PM
I am a NUT about the smells of men and ... this is such great storytelling. THANK YOU

3/18/24, 8:34 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much! :heart_eyes: