Recent Comments

4/2/24, 2:40 AM
I'm just wondering when this 'punishment' will end. What is John's ultimate goal? He could have embarrassed and ruined Chris' and Eric's live quite easily. What is he hoping will happen? Just curious. John does not miss a beat in the humiliation.

4/3/24, 3:31 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) It hasn't even been a full 24 hours since John started punishing Chris and not even 6 full hours with Eric. We'll see how far it goes, maybe once the Thompsons realize how screwed they are or how much they screwed others over. To be honest, when the punishment ends so will this story. So if you don't like the punishment then I guess don't read it? Honestly not sure what to make of this comment.

4/3/24, 7:03 PM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) I'm not offended by the story or the punishments. I'm just curious as to what is going on in John's mind. It gets me thinking about the bigger question of "how do we know when enough punishment has happened?" So again the story is fine it just raises the question I mentioned. It's very intriguing, how the human mind decides things. Perhaps I'm overthinking.

4/6/24, 9:57 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) In johns mind he wants to turn their very loves into a prison that will make them act against the homophobia. When he first started with Chris he didn't realize to what extent the two sons had contributed to the actions that he had been told about. It also became clear that the incident with the gym wasn't the first and certainly wouldn't be the last without John stepping in. Right now John is setting the building blocks for that prison and seeing how the Thompson's react and what effects them the most. He could just completely rewrite their personalities but that's not really reforming then. So in johns mind, and my own, he will continue to mess with them until he breaks them or he's sure that they won't break. He's also buying time until the oldest son is back and he can incorporate him in the punishments.

4/7/24, 6:12 PM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) Thanks for the insight!
Boomer
4/7/24, 11:35 AM
Genuinely my favourite smut series ever.......... looking forward to the next
4/7/24, 3:42 AM
This was so good. When’s the next chapter coming?!?!
4/7/24, 2:03 AM
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Absolutely love this story!!
Anonymous
4/6/24, 11:00 PM
Still waiting on Ch 2 🥵
4/5/24, 10:11 AM
Love me some oblivious outside parties,not gonna lie. Can't wait to see what John comes up wirh for Chris ans Eric with the help of some others who will be none the wiser.

4/6/24, 10:13 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) Glad to hear! I've got a few more outside parties planned. Definitely going to be some heavy embarrassment and exhibition in one of the next chapters and a heavy oblivious bdsm scene later on.
Muscle-Flex
4/5/24, 12:08 AM
This is so well-written! All the detail is excellent. Some authors rush stories, but you are really taking the time to explore and let us enjoy the process of what John is doing to the Thompsons. The scenarios, the inner thoughts and descriptions... whew! It all makes for a very hot read!

4/6/24, 10:04 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) So to me, you could write a sex scene in a paragraph or two. But what makes it interesting and fun to read is the thoughts and feelings behind it. Or the empty brained pleasure that sex can induce. Thank you for the kind words! I try to vary my words and give detail when it's needed and speed up and gloss over what isn't important. The initial push into an ass gets a lot of description but the following fifty thrusts don't need their own paragraphs. Lol
Anonymous
4/3/24, 10:58 PM
Loving the direction of this story!! Is there any chance of body or mental transformation that could come up soon?

4/6/24, 10:01 PM
@Anonymous There's been some slight body modification with making areas more sensitive and the removal of gag reflex. I'm not sure how extreme I would go with it, same with mental transformation. Making them get turned on by certain things or having mental reactions is one thing, but John wants any changes in their personalities needs to happen naturally and because it breaks them. I do have some ideas for temporary transformations but they would all revert to what they were before hand.
Anonymous
4/6/24, 9:11 AM
I've been anticipating this for a long time! It was worth the wait! Bravo!

4/6/24, 2:52 PM
@Anonymous thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it