Recent Comments

4/6/24, 3:26 AM
Loving the story so far! Hope we eventually end up see him rope in his team members and leader and get them in on the action.

4/6/24, 5:40 AM
@[Hilo](/user/show/10009799) I'm glad you're enjoying it and in time both Sanders, Beck, Miller, and others will be pulled in, right now just building up still.
4/5/24, 4:01 AM
There is obviously no way to please everyone in any artistic endeavor. So to be a devil's advocate, let me just say that I like long stories with rich character development and lot of context and pretext to the exciting parts. (Sorry Martin!) Of course I also tend to wait until there are multiple chapters to the stories, so I don't have to wonder so much if and when the next chapter is coming. By the way I am loving the story! Thanks for sharing your hot fantasies and writing skills.
4/5/24, 2:47 AM
@Cracker I need to be frank. This story was not my favorite, but my preference has little to do with your writing (which i love) and more to do with my perspective (which i am also perfectly happy with). I have never felt like an Alpha, always more like a follower, and more recently recognizing and feeling deeply submissive toward Alphas. As a result it's hard for me to relate at a gut level to the psychological shift in Wolf. Still, you created a wonderfully hot seduction, which held my attention throughout. Now I am off to find one of your stories in which an Alpha dominates and takes control of a submissive. ("The Alpha and His Beta" is one of my favorite stories of all time. I love their visit to the BDSM club!))
4/3/24, 8:39 PM
wow so hot with the two captains.
4/2/24, 9:38 AM
Chapter 50 hopefully! Happy to see this story back.

4/3/24, 3:39 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) We'll see how long it goes! I certainly have plans that could carry it pretty far. Unfortunately real life has been a lot lately so this has had to take a back seat. But I'm well on the way with the next chapter so it should be out next week at the latest.
4/2/24, 3:54 PM
Tengo una duda que espero me puedan responder, en cuestión de desarrollo de personajes, o personalidades cual les gusta más, se que no es que sean los personajes más distintivos pero en lo que hay cual les gusta más, en cualquier aspecto, personalidad, trasero, polla, historia... :penguin:
4/2/24, 3:50 PM
Cualquier idea que tengan puede hacérmela saber, recomendaciones, expectativas, dudas, recuerden que sino quieren que les conteste al final colocan un "*". Entre todo me gustaría saber que piensa de la ":shit:" que se hablo en la entrevistacon Asher, depende de sus comentarios si lo implemento o no, también puede que sea una historia aparte, de cualquier forma los estaré leyendo gracias siempre :heart:
4/2/24, 3:46 PM
Aquí en la zona de comentarios tu mensaje será bien cuidado, las nalgas competitivas de Ben "sujetarán" cada comentario, entre más largo sea el comentario más adentro de ese agujero tendrá que entrar, así no se le escapara nada, ¿no es así Ben? :love_letter: R: Ummm si... ¡YO OBTENDRÉ LA VICTORIA, ABRAN ESE CULO CHICOS! :peach:
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

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4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
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4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out