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4/9/24, 4:32 AM
I loved it. Thank you again.
4/9/24, 2:43 AM
I know they're AI but the pictures help with the epilogue.
4/7/24, 11:49 PM
So happy to see this chapter! And I am so thrilled in how this chapter preludes to the what is about to happen. Clearly Jamie isn't just wanted, he is needed. It adds so much more depth to his value and how things go from here. So now the big question is, how and when will he be turn?

4/8/24, 3:11 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I don't know that "turn" is the right word for what will happen with Jamie. This Interlude makes it pretty clear that Master and his drone henchmen will actively try to bring Jamie in, though it also suggests their first choice method remains persuasion. So maybe "be turned" might be the better verb tense here. Then there's the League's intent to try and interfere with Master acquiring Jamie, to try and apprehend him or some of his drones. How will that play out?

4/9/24, 12:36 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Yeah, I clearly didn't proof read what I wrote. I think this is either going one of two ways. One Jamie switches sides. He gets some more personal time with Dusk, keeps getting worked at the gym, and souring towards the Tribunal more and more. Though Dusk will have his work cut out for him, because Onyx is right to a point. The other is that Jamie is apprehended by the league and we get to see what the Tomb is. Either way, Luxor remains a mole and his conversion is much slower.
CHT
4/9/24, 12:17 AM
This story is so hot ... love that he is aware of everything that is happening
4/8/24, 11:03 PM
Amazing Epilogue!

4/8/24, 11:27 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I’m a fan of the prologue/ epilogue. I’ve been in a debate about this online. Some writers hate them, claim no one reads them. I think it’s a great way to say goodbye to characters. I’m glad you liked it!
4/8/24, 9:40 PM
Ain't this the dream, eh? Wonderful work so far. Looking forward to more.
hairyartist
4/8/24, 12:34 PM
I love it, thank you
4/7/24, 11:15 PM
At last! Seems like we've been waiting forever. But it's a good one.
4/7/24, 8:55 PM
💚💚💚💚
Anonymous
4/7/24, 4:07 PM
brilliant chapter and great chapter… loved the Budd brothers story and the way it was tied up… the senator and his son was fantastic story (and a bit of an open ending)… great that the supporting cast all got what they deep down wanted… now - I just wonder what does De Troy do next!!!

4/7/24, 8:41 PM
@Anonymous I'm so grateful for this comment for it allows me to explain. I got a little behind through the holiday and missed my "deadline" this week -- I did pretty good, readers got 11 weeks in a row -- but still... As you'll see in the "Epilogue" most of the storylines lack complete resolution -- I'll explain why in the "author's note" at the end -- but suffice to say I didn't know what to do with the Budd Brothers when I came into this story, but I sure as hell know what I'm doing with them next!