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4/7/24, 2:03 AM
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Absolutely love this story!!
Anonymous
4/6/24, 11:00 PM
Still waiting on Ch 2 🥵
4/5/24, 10:11 AM
Love me some oblivious outside parties,not gonna lie. Can't wait to see what John comes up wirh for Chris ans Eric with the help of some others who will be none the wiser.

4/6/24, 10:13 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) Glad to hear! I've got a few more outside parties planned. Definitely going to be some heavy embarrassment and exhibition in one of the next chapters and a heavy oblivious bdsm scene later on.
Muscle-Flex
4/5/24, 12:08 AM
This is so well-written! All the detail is excellent. Some authors rush stories, but you are really taking the time to explore and let us enjoy the process of what John is doing to the Thompsons. The scenarios, the inner thoughts and descriptions... whew! It all makes for a very hot read!

4/6/24, 10:04 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) So to me, you could write a sex scene in a paragraph or two. But what makes it interesting and fun to read is the thoughts and feelings behind it. Or the empty brained pleasure that sex can induce. Thank you for the kind words! I try to vary my words and give detail when it's needed and speed up and gloss over what isn't important. The initial push into an ass gets a lot of description but the following fifty thrusts don't need their own paragraphs. Lol
Anonymous
4/3/24, 10:58 PM
Loving the direction of this story!! Is there any chance of body or mental transformation that could come up soon?

4/6/24, 10:01 PM
@Anonymous There's been some slight body modification with making areas more sensitive and the removal of gag reflex. I'm not sure how extreme I would go with it, same with mental transformation. Making them get turned on by certain things or having mental reactions is one thing, but John wants any changes in their personalities needs to happen naturally and because it breaks them. I do have some ideas for temporary transformations but they would all revert to what they were before hand.
Anonymous
4/6/24, 9:11 AM
I've been anticipating this for a long time! It was worth the wait! Bravo!

4/6/24, 2:52 PM
@Anonymous thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
4/6/24, 3:26 AM
Loving the story so far! Hope we eventually end up see him rope in his team members and leader and get them in on the action.

4/6/24, 5:40 AM
@[Hilo](/user/show/10009799) I'm glad you're enjoying it and in time both Sanders, Beck, Miller, and others will be pulled in, right now just building up still.
4/5/24, 4:01 AM
There is obviously no way to please everyone in any artistic endeavor. So to be a devil's advocate, let me just say that I like long stories with rich character development and lot of context and pretext to the exciting parts. (Sorry Martin!) Of course I also tend to wait until there are multiple chapters to the stories, so I don't have to wonder so much if and when the next chapter is coming. By the way I am loving the story! Thanks for sharing your hot fantasies and writing skills.
4/5/24, 2:47 AM
@Cracker I need to be frank. This story was not my favorite, but my preference has little to do with your writing (which i love) and more to do with my perspective (which i am also perfectly happy with). I have never felt like an Alpha, always more like a follower, and more recently recognizing and feeling deeply submissive toward Alphas. As a result it's hard for me to relate at a gut level to the psychological shift in Wolf. Still, you created a wonderfully hot seduction, which held my attention throughout. Now I am off to find one of your stories in which an Alpha dominates and takes control of a submissive. ("The Alpha and His Beta" is one of my favorite stories of all time. I love their visit to the BDSM club!))
4/3/24, 8:39 PM
wow so hot with the two captains.