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8/22/25, 10:43 PM
One of the previous chapters had left me eager to see lance nerdification. It was quite hot!!! I hope you write more chapters in that scenario, maybe with even nerdier clothes and in nerdier scenarios, like in an anime convention. Lance is adorable, so sweet and kind, and I love all of the nerds characters in this story. I hope Ken has a happy ending, I was quite surprised to discover that in real life those things happen (it happened to me twice, and I'm a big nerd, so I believe in miracles!).
8/22/25, 8:17 PM
I'm so glad to see this series back. I was worried it was dropped. Kam is definitely being hard. The toilet specifically. But if you want to break your slave quickly, you gotta be demanding. Though it's also great to read just how quickly Taylor is going under. Perhaps he will even be in his own sub space before long. Yet, Kam is also looking after his slave as an with the meal. Ground beef with veggies and toppings rather good for slave food. The only thing I might have added was just as he came inside Taylor. Having him declare something along the lines of "I own you, slave!" Would have driven this home all the more.
Anonymous
8/22/25, 7:28 PM
Will Dante end up like lance and be huge masochist that likes wedgies? Nice chapter!
8/22/25, 4:31 PM
This was very sexy! Love the progression and the commands. The dildo play is great. The whole nature of Travis seeing this opens the door for maybe him also participating. So yeah very sexy. I hope he gets hard from dildo play and being fucked, totally would be fun if his big hard cock gets hard when fucked and his hole is filled. So I have to admit while most of the commands are great, the one where it says that if anyone uses "good slut" he will obey and get fucked feels dangerous to me. Its too common of a phrase and you don't want any random person being able to switch him, not if you want him to be normal during the day and such. So this feels destructive. Anyway, yeah, fun and sexy and hot. Lots of potential in these days. Love the submission of Mike to Josh. Looking forward to other jocks participating and such.
8/22/25, 3:49 PM
LOVED it... but always a romantic at heart LOL
Anonymous
8/22/25, 3:38 PM
Hope lance wedgies the coach!
Anonymous
8/22/25, 3:35 PM
Great chapter!!
8/22/25, 2:24 PM
Sounds to me like he's working that hole getting it prepped for one hell of a pounding and maybe even fisting session.
8/22/25, 1:31 PM
Omg need more of Week 2 ASAP!!! Mike is ready for more. I'm wondering when Josh will bring more hunks into the mix...Travis definitely seems curious (wonder what he looks like). Hoping the next installment comes quickly! Thank you for your service
8/22/25, 6:27 AM
The methods used to establish dominance and control are much less relevant to me than the evolving slippery slope into total power exchange. Drugs, pheromones, hypnosis, and so much more are all good tools to achieve the desired brainwash and control. I loved both chapters equally, although both chapters had the same issue of being much much too short for my taste. Maybe i am easily addicted but when i find something i like, i want more or it!! I did wonder whether it might work better to switch the order of the chapters as it seems Teddy was enslaved first, and then presumably used to draw work colleagues like Byron into a similar enslavement scheme. In any case there is so much more to say about the nature of the clones and the background and ultimate goals of the Replica organization and its founders. Having been totally taken in by this story, my only real suggestion, more of a plea really, is that there be many more chapters as soon as possible. Thanks to noper for an exciting story, already hot but also with great potential.