The plot thickens! I am still hoping they end up perversely happy. A long weekend, spring break, summer, christmas, long may this story continue 🤣

It still has me wondering what's next. I never realized how bearish Eric is. MMM, leather daddy bear sounds lovely.

I don't know how I somehow missed this series after loving the original 0_o Def agree with Tanners92 about Eric's size, especially if Eric loves the attention! Can't wait to read the next installment, these are a delight to read!

I can’t wait to see what happens with Peter when he joins the story. Any chance Eric’s cock gets shrunk? Big muscles small cock.

Oddly felt things ended just as got started. So much set up and enjoyable developing at the beginning then after the Budd explosion and senator met son ..I thought going to expand a bit more as the men got to know each other or went back or whatever. Transition to who now going to be and enjoy settling in. What's here is nice. Just feels a little anti climactic. We had this hot ensemble cast each mixing it up in a formula introduction with a wider conflict to drive interest as you did the " boring " day to day stuff (who is the bad kid, how will the ranch heads finesse their foe, will they give up the client, what that like or result in. Getting to see the staff and activities of the ranch or just changes to town and folk and what made) and then the changes and the enjoyment and then. .. Whoop all home plus summary of how it all worked out. Thing is the intimacy and build through IS great. The transition good too. But it's like things abruptly end for the hyper giant thing. Which feels...off. It was set up. But part of the disappointment is I liked the budds for their familiarity. Checking in was a treat as was their dynamic threats to their valued status quo some internal, others external. So felt it would be crisp when they'd get to respond or receive the rewards of the plan they implemented and pleasing to see how working that. Though i suppose not much else fresh to cover. Christian's obviously getting his comeuppance. Keywon got to indulge his bottomness. Gangly grew. Smokey got wild. etc. Just felt had a nice deliberate pace and build up and in the zone then to play through entertaining procedural. And now its over. I suppose" want more," especially as promised to build on somethings you are eager to explore is a good thing to feel at an ending. Well. I would rate this story overall an adjusted 3 on balance for writing. 4 on ideas and setting development. 3.5 characters. A nice spread we got to see play off into the build up Hotness is an obvious 4, thanks to many qualities. variety, character and interaction, setting, distinct voices, unique challenges, and goals and results offered offered in how came together. Mind control. To me the twisty seduction and mental effects permeate. More a feel than a specific thing. Used well save where a little abridged. So a decent experience with an abrupt if happy end

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I love this chapter and the world building of it all. Onyx, the smarmy little bastard, has grown on me a fair bit. I especially appreciate the fact that despite being a snide brat he is rather sharp. He seems to be the one holding everyone accountable, and I rather liked his psychoanalysis on dear Jaime. I cant help but feel as though Dusk definitely has some idealized version of Jaime in his head. Looking forward to the next installation!

Woohoo! What an exciting conclusion! Can't wait to see what a bunch of gay musclefreak giants get up to on their own private tropical island!

Love this story so much, it tickles so many of my fanatsies. I've been waiting for this chapter and I'm so happy because it was even better than I was expecting

Such a sexy chapter to reread! Love the way he makes them his.