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6/4/24, 3:07 AM
Amazing work, super hot
6/4/24, 12:00 AM
This was outstanding. Holy moly I wanna meet that leather Daddy.
6/3/24, 5:37 PM
Omg, I'm really liking the set-up and the story so far. It's a humorous nice change of pace in terms of jocks-nerds relations. I'm personally hoping this can be a big-sub-small-top scenario down the line. But any direction you'll take, I'm sure I'll be able to enjoy it too! This story gives me a good wank this morning after I haven't been on this site for a while. So yeah,thanks for writing! Oh and after reading, my mind cant help but wandered of to this particular comic/Manga by Naop. It showcases the nerd topping the sexy bottom jock. Since was translated from Japanese, reading will be from right to left panel, top to to bottom. Enjoy you guys~ https://myreadingmanga.info/anything-naop-capture-2-eng/

6/4/24, 12:00 AM
@[Numi Nani](/user/show/1783993) Oh I'm aiming for THAT; Alex is going to get his knight in white-tighties, and Lance will learn the wonders of getting his butt boinked by a dude.
6/3/24, 10:17 PM
Wow. Wow wow wow. Outstandingly done You tease with "...excited"? I came hard enough to splash myself in the face. Did not mind the cleanup required for enjoying this. Even though I'm not specifically into leather as a kink (though I find the aesthetic hot), this story conveyed the eroticism of it to me. And holy hell was this an amazing adaptation of the "stage hypnotist" trope. The leather convention setup gives a good suspension of disbelief, and the relative normalcy of everything else really makes the total mind control Dom hit even harder.
5/23/24, 10:53 PM
Hey friend, your reference image links seem to be broken!

5/23/24, 11:47 PM
@[A Haruspex](/user/show/10004423) Hmm. I host my images on catbox.moe and they’re working for me. Do any of the “connectivity issues” at the bottom of [this link](https://catbox.moe/faq.php) apply to you?

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5/24/24, 12:35 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) For me the individual image links are "loading" forever, and the faq page you linked is also "loading" forever. Edit: I waited long enough for it to "time out" so I guess by forever I mean, it never resolves and just times out.

5/24/24, 9:16 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I like your use of footnotes (I think you're about the first person to use it...) but couldn't you just embed the images themselves in the footnote section?

6/3/24, 12:36 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I didn’t want to force people to have to see the characters the way I do. If I upload the images to the site, can I link people to those images even if the images are never embedded in any story?

6/3/24, 6:34 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) In theory, yes. The images are accessible using a normal URL, and you can embed them as links as any other external link.
6/3/24, 5:44 PM
I liked when he told him he loved him. 🥹
5/31/24, 8:35 PM
This was a hot and sexy story!

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I knew you’d like this one, too! Glad you read it.
5/27/24, 5:31 AM
Sexy and lighthearted, and wonderfully capturing the allure or porn scripts. And it’s fun to be in the head of a roleplayer, walking that rope between cheesy acting and keeping the horniness up. Great job, really. And thanks so much for gifting us with your stories

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I appreciate every time you comment! It feels good to have almost a “regular” who sees a Soren Fitz story and knows “oh yeah that’s gonna be fun,” heh, and comments are always a gift to me. But yeah, getting into the head of a roleplayer was a blast. Time taught me a lot about that mindset so I could write this, and I felt like it added something really fun, interesting, and unique to the scene that I hoped would make it possibly more immersive than even pure porn logic, because there was a reason for the top’s surreal dialogue and actions. Glad it was fun!
5/25/24, 9:02 PM
Another outstanding work, Soren! You nailed that almost-otherworldly fantasy vibe that porn provides that we all buy into, the suspension of disbelief and just rolling with it. Concurred with some of the other commenters - great pick of references, you have good taste! Can't wait to see what other porny scenarios you can think up, and I'll be there to read 'em! ;)

6/3/24, 12:45 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, it’s the “rolling with it” that was so vital to the fantasy here. As long as Marco, the POV, acts like the situation is normal, so can the readers—and even the little “shocks to the system” where the fantasy is revealed to be just a roleplay don’t have to affect that feeling of normality. As easily as you can pause your porn vid and respond to a message on your phone, so you can step out of the fantasy for a moment and then step back in.
5/25/24, 7:24 AM
Loved this, but especially the back and forth erotic plumber talk and that Marco’s reference model is the sexy, bubble butt, big titty Jess Mesino himself! Always imagined Mesino (Marco) having his pipes pumped full of cum, but this was a nice change of pace!

6/3/24, 12:39 PM
@[Sky Larkin](/user/show/10011200) I don’t know why but Jess Mesino just has this really great _dad_ vibe that I felt could really get him into a dom mood! I def think his ass deserves to be used, maybe by his young blond trainee. Not sure which POV to write that from, though. Glad you enjoyed the dialogue, too! I worked really hard on it. Before Time’s help, it was basically one singular metaphor about clogged pipes that got boring and old fast, but I was able to diversify it a lot more in the end.