Hope this continues soon

Yeeeeeeees! The wait was very well worth it. Amazing job

Are there still plans for a chapter 3?

though I wished for more horny scenes, I loved that this story is so, with a lack of word, plot driven! I just love the intricacies that this series has and I want this to be published, genuinely -S.P.P,

Hmm. I don’t usually leave critical feedback, but this chapter seemed strange to me. I really like the premise of this story, and I thought the first chapter was hot, but I missed having a little bit more descriptive sex scenes in this chapter. It came across to me like “He sucked my dick. Then he sucked my dick again. Then he licked my feet. Then my friend came over and fucked him. Then he licked my feet again. Then a bunch of my friends came over and fucked him 10 times.” Sorry to be negative about it but I thought this one had a lot of potential after the first chapter.

The plot thickens! I am still hoping they end up perversely happy. A long weekend, spring break, summer, christmas, long may this story continue 🤣

It still has me wondering what's next. I never realized how bearish Eric is. MMM, leather daddy bear sounds lovely.

I don't know how I somehow missed this series after loving the original 0_o Def agree with Tanners92 about Eric's size, especially if Eric loves the attention! Can't wait to read the next installment, these are a delight to read!

I can’t wait to see what happens with Peter when he joins the story. Any chance Eric’s cock gets shrunk? Big muscles small cock.

Oddly felt things ended just as got started. So much set up and enjoyable developing at the beginning then after the Budd explosion and senator met son ..I thought going to expand a bit more as the men got to know each other or went back or whatever. Transition to who now going to be and enjoy settling in. What's here is nice. Just feels a little anti climactic. We had this hot ensemble cast each mixing it up in a formula introduction with a wider conflict to drive interest as you did the " boring " day to day stuff (who is the bad kid, how will the ranch heads finesse their foe, will they give up the client, what that like or result in. Getting to see the staff and activities of the ranch or just changes to town and folk and what made) and then the changes and the enjoyment and then. .. Whoop all home plus summary of how it all worked out. Thing is the intimacy and build through IS great. The transition good too. But it's like things abruptly end for the hyper giant thing. Which feels...off. It was set up. But part of the disappointment is I liked the budds for their familiarity. Checking in was a treat as was their dynamic threats to their valued status quo some internal, others external. So felt it would be crisp when they'd get to respond or receive the rewards of the plan they implemented and pleasing to see how working that. Though i suppose not much else fresh to cover. Christian's obviously getting his comeuppance. Keywon got to indulge his bottomness. Gangly grew. Smokey got wild. etc. Just felt had a nice deliberate pace and build up and in the zone then to play through entertaining procedural. And now its over. I suppose" want more," especially as promised to build on somethings you are eager to explore is a good thing to feel at an ending. Well. I would rate this story overall an adjusted 3 on balance for writing. 4 on ideas and setting development. 3.5 characters. A nice spread we got to see play off into the build up Hotness is an obvious 4, thanks to many qualities. variety, character and interaction, setting, distinct voices, unique challenges, and goals and results offered offered in how came together. Mind control. To me the twisty seduction and mental effects permeate. More a feel than a specific thing. Used well save where a little abridged. So a decent experience with an abrupt if happy end