Recent Comments

7/11/25, 4:34 AM
Thanks so much guys! I've edited it to fix the formatting so hopefully it will be more readable. Just finished chapter 2 waiting for approval.
7/10/25, 10:50 PM
Excellently written and white-hot. Loved the competing narratives.

7/11/25, 3:54 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm planning to use Ollie and Ed as a framing narrative, so they'll be back but not right away! Hope that there's some more characters and hot action that grabs you though. Part 2 has some set up/exposition for Ed as a younger man and the situation he finds himself then Part 3 is...pretty hot, I think.. White-hot? I really value that compliment. Thank you for the comment.
7/11/25, 1:31 AM
This was such a great chapter! Fantastic writing too!
MakoTako
7/10/25, 3:58 PM
Cant wait for the next part!
7/10/25, 5:29 AM
Oh, the things that await this guy, I hope he gets to enjoy some of them :)

7/10/25, 11:00 AM
@[luisadjani](/user/show/971980) A lot of the parts of this story have already been released on this website. Feel free to checkout. The pledge is in for a treat ;)
7/10/25, 6:02 AM
love love love the dual narratives. very intense and exciting!

7/10/25, 8:03 AM
@[Antimony723](/user/show/10011682) Haha, felt like to much exposition to be giving the reader without some sex. Thank you so much for the comment - really means a lot to me to get one.
7/10/25, 4:05 AM
Easily one of the best on the site. Love the gradual realization that the control was inevitable. I wish I could have seen more of the sex scenes. Incredible story! Can’t wait to see who wrote this so I can follow all the rest of your work!
7/10/25, 3:28 AM
This chapter is sooo good. I love the hold that Lan has on Thor. The cage just adds to it, too~ Woof!
Bucky
7/9/25, 5:35 PM
OK, that was HOT! Got lost in the story, and my cock spontaneously reacted. Full boner. To the author… GOOD BOY!
7/9/25, 3:45 PM
Please add more chapters.