Recent Comments

4/24/24, 11:07 PM
Looking forward to this! You should link the separate chapters into the same story! 🙂

Rubberspiraldronthiago
4/26/24, 1:25 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I tried that but I got the second chapter apart from the fact that I'm new to writing, I've always been a reader, I'm learning. I invite you to read the second part. Thank you for your contribution champion
4/25/24, 7:42 PM
Re-read everything to be sure I did not forget anything, man the whole story is so hot!!! So many new men to turn into depraved slaves, so many possibilities, but Christmas is not over yet!
4/25/24, 8:16 AM
A fun little story. I can't wait to see what kind of trouble they can get into.
4/25/24, 1:27 AM
Intriguing end to the chapter... and j am quite curious about Ced's surprise video!
4/24/24, 5:53 PM
Fantastic story. Thank you for writing and posting
Anonymous
4/24/24, 2:16 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see where this goes.
Zander
4/23/24, 8:42 AM
When will this wonderful story continue?
4/22/24, 9:09 PM
I wasn't sure that you really needed to expand on the first story. It seemed pretty straightforward, the clones simply drug and reprogram their owners to take over for them for some reason. Fun concept and interesting twist, but could easily have been a one and done. However with this story, the clone has some kind of pheromone power, the mental subjugation sequence is really interesting and hot. You successfully sold the concept of someone enjoying being driven into an animalistic state of submission. Now I'm also questioning if the other clone was actually drugging food or if the clones exude some kind of drug from their biology that affects their template human. That'll be interesting to find out.
Anonymous
4/22/24, 7:56 AM
Please continue this