Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/12/24, 3:49 PM
such a hot chapter… lucky Erik!!!
Zander
5/11/24, 2:04 AM
When will this wonderful story continue? I hope new chapters will be released soon or is there somewhere else I can read them?

5/11/24, 5:46 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I apprecaite that you enjoyed it and are looking forward to the next chapter. I promise I haven't forgotten about it and have begun work on it. It got paused because of some real life stuff and commissions. But rest assured it'll be completed. There's nowhere to read subsequent chapters yet but the proceeding chapters are all on GSS (https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10003225 and my AO3 https://archiveofourown.org/users/fanboi214/works)

Zander
5/12/24, 2:33 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thank you very much for the reply.I hope you will add new chapters soon and continue this wonderful story to the end.
5/12/24, 8:37 AM
Great story! Circus-themed transformation stories are always interesting. Clown or Strongman transformation is good, but this unusual kind of transformation is even more interesting.
Jocker
5/11/24, 11:46 AM
Great story. Really well written. I felt like I was in the room with them. I loved the turn of play and The Leather Daddy getting caught in the act. Very intense. Nice work. I’d love another chapter!

5/11/24, 6:37 PM
@Jocker Thanks man, I'm glad you enjoyed. More to come.
5/9/24, 7:14 PM
I don't understand why Roy has to sell his body for the team. Why him and only him? Why does the team need money for someone's baby? A few plot points left unexplained. I know it's a fantasy but I'm curious.

5/11/24, 10:20 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Haha yeah, the plot is not that strong I admit... But he got her pregnant so it's like his way of paying back for the scandal/getting funds for the teams because of his actions... In my head it works. It's kind of explained at the beginning but you're right, I should make things clearer from now on

5/11/24, 1:47 PM
@[SoftBoiBuns](/user/show/10033233) That's fine. I was curious why he had to sell his body. Thanks.
Anonymous
5/11/24, 5:39 AM
As I was following the story I'd find myself getting lost into it and just nodding and getting more excited. Almost as if I were Alex and I went into a trance taking in the Doctor's programming. Had to re-read after that and it only got stronger. Can't wait to read more and more

5/11/24, 12:03 PM
@Anonymous Good boy! Perfect, part of my intention is for readers to experience Dr. Jonathan's power in them too.
5/10/24, 2:25 PM
Like Sammy, you hit another one out of the ball park

5/11/24, 12:07 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) So glad you're still reading!
5/10/24, 8:07 PM
It’s cool getting this viewpoint. Great work. Damn I’m so in love with all the Parker’s.

5/11/24, 12:06 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks bud!