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jj allen
10/18/24, 4:28 AM
I want to be Tom
fan
10/16/24, 6:24 PM
reread this again; sometimes I wonder what if jake and dave's bodies are linked up in the end. it turns out that they were united after all as alpha and beta in service of the administrator though i am unsure if the administrator would choose that decision willfully; would it consciously let them?

10/17/24, 9:19 PM
@fan I remember when writing "Brain Feed", I always had a feeling that Dave had some power of suggestion in being paired up with Jacob. That he gave a recommendation, and that suggestion was for Jacob to become a beta drone, and the two of them be paired together. I mean if the drones become the eyes and ears and sensors, then the Administrator does need to be a little receptive to what the drones are perceiving. So I remember thinking that Dave would have suggested that he be paired with Jacob. Then of course, the facility would do an in-depth analysis whether this would benefit their goals. Would Dave and Jacob's DNA create powerful hybrid clones? Would Jacob be a suitable beta drone, or is he better suited as an Alpha? After the analysis was conducted, the facility determined that Dave was correct in his observation and carried out the drone's suggestion. Whether there was an emotional or logical purpose behind Dave's suggestion ... that's for the reader to determine. I remember, when I wrote the original Brain Feed, that I always liked the idea that Dave could assert some control ... or have some minor influence over the Administrator. Or maybe, in a way, a man could make a suggestion: "Jacob would be more receptive to our goals if you pair us up; me as the Alpha, him as the beta." Even though I had this idea when writing, I just couldn't incorporate it into the story. Everything is told from Jacob's perspective. And there was no way for me to show the reader what Dave was thinking internally.
Ben
10/17/24, 8:05 AM
Still one of my faves! Keeping an eye out for more of your writing! 🔥 🔥
Anonymous
8/11/22, 7:12 PM
ah, racism ❤️

Anonymous
10/16/24, 6:26 AM
@Anonymous Agreed. I love it. Power exchange between races is so hot 🥵
Anonymous
10/15/24, 10:08 PM
I hope there is a follow up.
Oct 14, 2024
Anonymous
10/15/24, 8:53 PM
Fucking hot story and idea , love it , more cock tf
10/13/24, 11:48 PM
Fucking hell what an amazing read! You've outdone yourself as usual.

10/15/24, 10:04 AM
@[JoshAllen](/user/show/10031013) Thanks, Josh! Could not have done it without you.
Boomer
10/15/24, 9:52 AM
aww that ending is sweet but still committing to the horniness. Nice
Anonymous
10/14/24, 5:00 PM
Read this two days ago and have been thinking about it since. Read again this morning. Solid way to start my day off. So hot.

10/15/24, 9:52 AM
@Anonymous Heh, sticking with you, huh.
Baller
10/13/24, 8:03 PM
Best bodyswap scenario I’ve ever read. And this is not an easy topic to work through believably. I love how you switched it back and forth and kept me guessing. Really a top notch job. Very well written and smokin hot.

10/15/24, 9:51 AM
@Baller Thanks Baller. I appreciate that.