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xo
5/15/24, 12:57 AM
So hot omg
5/14/24, 9:41 PM
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
5/14/24, 5:08 PM
Glad you enjoyed the series of two episodes, Antnee. Thanks for letting me know.
5/14/24, 3:44 PM
The induction is excellent, but risks being repetitive without action. And, please, Mancini (an Italian surname); Manccini is a mistake.

5/14/24, 4:14 PM
@[clami](/user/show/910227) ManCCini may be a mistake in Italy, but many surnames have changed in Brazil and this surname exists in Brazil. But this is a work of fiction, so the important thing is to maintain verisimilitude and not a copy of reality. But thanks for the tip, it's noted.
5/14/24, 11:53 AM
I really ENJOY the hypnotic journey that Jonathan is preparing. I love this story. THANK YOU
5/14/24, 2:17 AM
I read and reread these stories (parts one and two) constantly. I have to force myself to take breaks so I can be surprised anew. Gosh this is brilliant work. Thank you!
May 13, 2024
5/13/24, 11:47 PM
Or some interesting twist of "infection" received by the fucking of the owner. The "first" time could all be a ruse.

5/14/24, 12:21 AM
@[zimdog](/user/show/934645) That would be a pretty compelling continuation, but as this is the second story with the protagonist, the emerging pattern is that the protagonist beats all opposition pretty easily, providing the readers with relatively surface-level smut. Which is fine, and reasonably hot, but doesn't really lend itself to twists.

5/14/24, 12:44 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Missed the first one.....going back now. Perhaps he will "meet his match" at some point. Fall of an alpha type of story.