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5/19/24, 12:23 AM
Rubbrsome, I've been a big fan of your stories for a long time. One of my favorite hypno writers. The Male Order has a deeply dreamlike quality to it- an erotic nightmare. While I have my own qualms with AI art, I have to admit that the images you used in the story help contribute to the surreal, fluid tone of the story- male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange, but not unrecognizable. Bustard's generations capture a deeply erotic element of the transhuman, of the inhuman. My mind says no, but another part of me says "yes, yes, yes!"

5/19/24, 1:42 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the amazing compliment. When I first stumbled across BVSTARD's images, my mind was blown. I desperately wanted to incorporate his art into one of my stories. It was simply because I had never seen imagery (from film, TV, print, photo, or any type of media) that got close to what I was envisioning inside my mind. The way you described "male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange ..." is a great description of that scenarios that are happening inside my imagination. And BVSTARD's art is the closest I've seen that touches my imagination. So OF COURSE I had to contact him, get permission and write a story. It wasn't hard in writing. His imagery instantly got my ideas churning. And I was very pleased with the results. I'm so glad you succumbed and have that desire to say "yes, yes, yes!"
littledickslave@yahoo.com
5/18/24, 8:42 PM
Excellent story! So hot to see a man's cock shrink to become a boy's clit, while he accepts that he is totally owned and submits to and obeys his owner without reservation!

5/18/24, 9:51 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com Thank you, this is just the start of Callum’s story, we see him go from buff straight guy, massive cock to gay Twink Sub with a boy clit. I’m thoroughly enjoying writing this.
Zander
5/18/24, 12:34 AM
Thanks for the chapter, I would like to see how Callum’s ex-girlfriend is kidnapped and turned into a guy) it would be very interesting to read about her father as well.

5/18/24, 7:03 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) The Ex-girlfriend will make an appearance again as Callum’s story continues.
5/18/24, 1:08 PM
WOW! The references to all the smells in the room... they brought me deeply into the moment. THANK YOU. THis is beautifully written and so exciting to me. I love your writing and this story and feel so connected to Carlos. He is my man!
May 18, 2024
5/18/24, 6:53 AM
As great as ever.
5/18/24, 1:08 AM
Magnificent, truly! I love consentual/nonconsent. I was introduced to that concept elsewhere and it is employed deliciously here. This was worth the wait, the buildup making the payoff even sweeter. And thank you for the dedication. Insert blushing emoji here ...

5/18/24, 1:19 AM
@[Antnee](/user/show/10043490) Thank you very much, from the bottom of my heart!
5/18/24, 1:19 AM
I love this chapter. The mythology mixed with the hypersexuality of the Coins and Jasper getting some level of balance with the conflict in him of obeying the implanted programming while also being himself pleases Rhys. That's a powerful moment to read. Also, hot sex and Jasper flipping the script to surprise a few Coins and delight all of them. He's so charming. Nova's counterpoint by providing, essentially, Jasper's old perspective is also wonderfully weaved in to add a tension and dynamic that feels three dimensional. Even we aren't sure just how much of this new life is really Jasper anymore. But, I think his feelings for Rhys are real so I am hanging out for a compromise between who he was and his old life and friends and who he is becoming. Also, having the Golden Lattice as an actual game to play is super cool! Another magnificent chapter re-worked into an even tighter well-paced piece of character, horniness, and plot. <3
5/17/24, 10:34 PM
We want another chapter!
5/17/24, 10:19 PM
Good start