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5/18/24, 1:08 AM
Magnificent, truly! I love consentual/nonconsent. I was introduced to that concept elsewhere and it is employed deliciously here. This was worth the wait, the buildup making the payoff even sweeter. And thank you for the dedication. Insert blushing emoji here ...

5/18/24, 1:19 AM
@[Antnee](/user/show/10043490) Thank you very much, from the bottom of my heart!
5/18/24, 1:19 AM
I love this chapter. The mythology mixed with the hypersexuality of the Coins and Jasper getting some level of balance with the conflict in him of obeying the implanted programming while also being himself pleases Rhys. That's a powerful moment to read. Also, hot sex and Jasper flipping the script to surprise a few Coins and delight all of them. He's so charming. Nova's counterpoint by providing, essentially, Jasper's old perspective is also wonderfully weaved in to add a tension and dynamic that feels three dimensional. Even we aren't sure just how much of this new life is really Jasper anymore. But, I think his feelings for Rhys are real so I am hanging out for a compromise between who he was and his old life and friends and who he is becoming. Also, having the Golden Lattice as an actual game to play is super cool! Another magnificent chapter re-worked into an even tighter well-paced piece of character, horniness, and plot. <3
5/17/24, 10:34 PM
We want another chapter!
5/17/24, 10:19 PM
Good start
5/17/24, 8:50 PM
This looks to become very interesting!
Anonymous
5/14/24, 5:49 PM
Dam this was so so hot it's unreal loved the continuation and looking forward to seeing where you go if there is a part 3 I hope there is... maybe Mike getting taken down a peg or two in his usual bar

5/16/24, 11:23 AM
@Anonymous Thanks man. I think you'll like where this goes. But it might not be where you think.

Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:03 PM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) Oooooo now I'm super excited for where this goes now I love your work always get me going and it might not go where I think but I trust your work mmmmm

5/17/24, 12:41 PM
@Anonymous [Grin]
Anonymous
5/17/24, 12:36 PM
Good start!
5/17/24, 2:21 AM
Wow. What an amazingly written sex scene!
5/6/24, 11:22 PM
I already want to see the other Tompson brother and I would like to see Eric in his police suit.

5/16/24, 7:10 PM
@Morbius We will definitely see Eric in his police uniform. I'm currently planning a few scenes for each of them at their places of work. We will eventually meet Peter the older brother. But it's going to be a bit. It's only Saturday evening and he won't be introduced until Monday.