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1/12/26, 11:41 AM
This is a wonderful story! Of course it reminded me of Brain Feed, but whereas that story is told in "prose," this story (The cumUNITY) has a very definite musical rhythm to it. The repetitions create a rhythm which, when combined with the narrative creates a marvelous pacing. I've never read mature James Joyce, but there's such a wonderful tension created by the juxtaposition of the stream of conscious as the narrator tries to frequently reassure himself that things are ok whereas the reader suspects and knows the inevitable. (And yes, while and after reading it I had to relieve myself because it's so arousing.) Bravo rubbrsome for your very unique vision and your superlative way of expressing and sharing it!
1/12/26, 10:12 AM
This unit has never read the original Brain Feed to its recollection, but it did enjoy this story a lot. :)

1/12/26, 11:34 AM
@[DNK-094321](/user/show/10037283) I'm sure many will agree that [Brain Feed](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/1670) is one of the best and most original stories on this site.
1/9/26, 7:23 PM
This story seems to have a lot of elements from the “Master Y” series on this site. Don’t get me wrong both are great stories but it’s odd they are so similar

1/10/26, 4:59 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) Where can I find the story you describe?

1/10/26, 9:40 AM
@[cjayerick](/user/show/10005597) The story is here https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10005773

1/11/26, 4:50 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) It's a fairly classic trope in the reprogramming genre! I do love seeing these kinds of stories done well, and this one is so far!

1/12/26, 2:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I suppose it may be, but its also following the other story beat for beat. The same rules. The same shower meetings. Etc.
Rob
3/22/25, 3:30 PM
So hot !!! Loved how it took revenge against onlyfans people who scam others and this was by far one of the more unique angles to depict hot sexy foot worship in such a naughty way 😈 I have friends who find hypnosis to be very sexy too and I love how you weave it into the narrative here. You write excellently and paint a vivid picture with all your details. 5 out of 5!! Would love to see a porn of this

1/12/26, 2:31 AM
@Rob 😈 Thank you!
1/11/26, 10:04 PM
I think I wrote the original Brain Feed about 10 years ago. And it's definitely been one of my more popular stories. I always resisted going back to it. I didn't want to risk messing it up with an inferior sequel. But over the last month, an idea started to form. I began to wonder if the Male Community Centers could evolve. Would they get better and better, and what would that world look like? And while they evolved, would man devolve? How would the isolation break someone? So I hope I didn't turn readers off with a strange form of writing. I mean: it's a first person narration, stream-of-consciousness because we're basically privy to a person's thoughts as they think them. And a person doesn't always think in grammatically correct structure. Especially a man that's been suffering from extreme isolation and psychological torture. So if you were able to muster through it all, I hope you enjoyed the ride.
1/11/26, 8:32 PM
It was pretty good until the piss play started. I wish he was a kinder master.
1/11/26, 4:52 PM
Wow!! Is there going to be more of this? 😃🫣
1/11/26, 1:38 PM
Ooh i like that he madr Alfred stronger and daddier.
1/11/26, 1:17 PM
Thanks very much for your likes, ratings and messages of support. Where possible, I try to take your suggestions onboard, so Alex the next chapter is entitled 'Submissive Smoking' and has just been sent off for publishing on 11 January, so hopefully it will be ready ready to read by the 15th. Titan is one of the great innovators and story-tellers on this site, so please enjoy his work, if you haven't already!
1/8/26, 11:06 AM
Would be fun to the class take a trip to visit a slave processing centre, maybe the new slaves could feel what it’s like to be properly processed into permanent slaves… jus to give them a taste

1/11/26, 1:04 AM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) agreed i would love that.