Recent Comments

5/24/24, 10:27 AM
Please tell me this isn't the last chapter!!! I'm DIEING to read John's perspective on their trip where Sammy apologizes to him.

5/24/24, 10:34 AM
@[Mr.Doubtfier](/user/show/10036330) Far from over, we still have to get John caught up to real time with Sammy and Eden :)
Anon
5/24/24, 9:59 AM
I know it’s too late but the airport/airplane setting and experience was a lost opportunity! Enjoying everything else though.
Anonymous
5/24/24, 7:22 AM
Thanks for the second chapter. Surprisingly, imagining an ugly boy with massive pecs is far more of a turn-on than just a perfect guy. Keep going. I hope you get all the encouragement you need.
5/23/24, 12:33 AM
Wow, loved this story! Would definitely love to read the original!

5/24/24, 5:37 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I'm a little embarrassed about the original one but I'll check about publishing it here too. It's original title was "El Asistente de Mago"!

5/24/24, 6:06 AM
@[CyanideT](/user/show/2232547) No worries, I'm sure it's just as great! Just found it and can't wait to read!
5/23/24, 11:08 PM
Hell yeah!

5/24/24, 5:38 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) 😁
5/23/24, 8:47 PM
Really well done! Imaginative, hot, and a great read.

5/24/24, 5:38 AM
@[Scott](/user/show/459693) Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:16 PM
wow this is hot is there going to be more chapters?

5/23/24, 4:40 PM
@Anonymous Just submitted the next chapter today!
5/23/24, 10:19 AM
So glad to see this one come back. I hope there’s not as long of a wait til part 3!
5/23/24, 4:21 AM
Teasing the decline at the end… About to get spicy🔥🔥🔥 So glad this is continuing!
5/23/24, 4:05 AM
A really solid idea. I'm glad to see you continuing with this.