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1/12/26, 9:15 PM
Dispatch if it was good 😏
1/12/26, 2:35 PM
BRAIN FEED was the first of your stories I stumbled across -- lo, so many years ago -- and I remember being blown out of the water by it. As a writer, I admired its construction. As a reader... well, I love the orgasms it's given me. This is a delightful return. Writing stream of consciousness stories is tough, but you give us a sense of where and when -- I feel like you got everything across that you were intending us to know. Good return! Really, really enjoyed this!

1/12/26, 6:14 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks, Absman! I'm not sure I got the stream of consciousness right. After re-reading it, I started thinking: would somebody actually think that? It's always a tricky tightrope to walk.

1/12/26, 8:55 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well, here we are in fiction, where some things must be forgiven. Every time I read a comic book, I see people saying things they'd never say, thinking things no one would ever think -- "I've got to get that weapon away from him before he uses it to reset time!" --- but they serve storytelling. You done good, kid.
1/12/26, 4:10 PM
Great to see you back with a new story! As a piece of writing and imaginative worldbuilding, this is very strong. There is some great play with language, especially with all the bold-faced ITs, presumably representing both inhumanity and Information Technology. That said, the story didn't turn me on in the way the original "Brain Feed" did, partly because our narrator here basically is all alone, and all the rubber-clad drones around him have become silent and interchangeable. I personally find your stories hottest when the characters are being reprogrammed but still have some semblance of humanity. I think in my ideal version of this story, the narrator would have had some kind of interaction with Brody or his other friends, urging him to join the cumUNITY. But still, I really enjoyed this and thought it was a very accomplished piece of writing.

1/12/26, 6:21 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) That's completely fair. In this story, I wasn't so much aiming to get people off, but wanted to just return to the world and see how the Male Community Centers would've evolved? Could they evolve? And as they grew, and man diminished ... what would that be like? I think this was partially inspired by the final season of Stranger Things. Because there were so many parallels to a Wrinkle in Time, all these memories and fears of that book came flooding back. That mental image of Meg, walking through this neighborhood and seeing how she was a complete outsider in world that had conformed.. How IT forced everyone conformed. And I was also getting mental flashes of Tom Hanks character in the movie Castaway. How he was slowly being driven mad by his isolation. I guess, I just wanted to explore how man is not built to be alone. Is it better to resist, or is it better to conform? Even if you might lose your humanity ... and even if it's for the best? Hmmm ... as I ask these questions, I'm realizing that I probably didn't really explore this enough in the story.
1/12/26, 5:54 PM
Even though so many years have passed, you remain my favorite author of drone stories. It's just wonderful!!:heart_eyes:
Domslutinbriefs
1/12/26, 2:57 PM
Thank you man, that story is amazing and you are super amazing for writing it. A lot of story here managed to make me super horny, very few made me as happy as yours ^^ Take care of yourself and best wishes for 2026 !

1/12/26, 3:09 PM
@Domslutinbriefs Aw, thanks! :blush: This is a series I put a lot of heart into writing over the past year, so it's great to hear from people who really enjoyed it!
1/12/26, 11:41 AM
This is a wonderful story! Of course it reminded me of Brain Feed, but whereas that story is told in "prose," this story (The cumUNITY) has a very definite musical rhythm to it. The repetitions create a rhythm which, when combined with the narrative creates a marvelous pacing. I've never read mature James Joyce, but there's such a wonderful tension created by the juxtaposition of the stream of conscious as the narrator tries to frequently reassure himself that things are ok whereas the reader suspects and knows the inevitable. (And yes, while and after reading it I had to relieve myself because it's so arousing.) Bravo rubbrsome for your very unique vision and your superlative way of expressing and sharing it!
1/12/26, 10:12 AM
This unit has never read the original Brain Feed to its recollection, but it did enjoy this story a lot. :)

1/12/26, 11:34 AM
@[DNK-094321](/user/show/10037283) I'm sure many will agree that [Brain Feed](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/1670) is one of the best and most original stories on this site.
1/9/26, 7:23 PM
This story seems to have a lot of elements from the “Master Y” series on this site. Don’t get me wrong both are great stories but it’s odd they are so similar

1/10/26, 4:59 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) Where can I find the story you describe?

1/10/26, 9:40 AM
@[cjayerick](/user/show/10005597) The story is here https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10005773

1/11/26, 4:50 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) It's a fairly classic trope in the reprogramming genre! I do love seeing these kinds of stories done well, and this one is so far!

1/12/26, 2:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I suppose it may be, but its also following the other story beat for beat. The same rules. The same shower meetings. Etc.
Rob
3/22/25, 3:30 PM
So hot !!! Loved how it took revenge against onlyfans people who scam others and this was by far one of the more unique angles to depict hot sexy foot worship in such a naughty way 😈 I have friends who find hypnosis to be very sexy too and I love how you weave it into the narrative here. You write excellently and paint a vivid picture with all your details. 5 out of 5!! Would love to see a porn of this

1/12/26, 2:31 AM
@Rob 😈 Thank you!
1/11/26, 10:04 PM
I think I wrote the original Brain Feed about 10 years ago. And it's definitely been one of my more popular stories. I always resisted going back to it. I didn't want to risk messing it up with an inferior sequel. But over the last month, an idea started to form. I began to wonder if the Male Community Centers could evolve. Would they get better and better, and what would that world look like? And while they evolved, would man devolve? How would the isolation break someone? So I hope I didn't turn readers off with a strange form of writing. I mean: it's a first person narration, stream-of-consciousness because we're basically privy to a person's thoughts as they think them. And a person doesn't always think in grammatically correct structure. Especially a man that's been suffering from extreme isolation and psychological torture. So if you were able to muster through it all, I hope you enjoyed the ride.