Recent Comments

6/4/24, 4:12 AM
Tremendous writing. The pacing is brilliant and the concept is fantastic. The ease with which Rob 'identifies' Mark as not really a dom and the arousal and tension that creates in the crowd. Their probably asking themselves whether it just Mark's true nature he'd been putting on an act to hide, or if Rob had made him into a sub. The gradual succumbing to it, that he doesn't even hear the advice for doms because he's not one any more was genius. Combining it with an appreciation from leather is also nicely done and gives it an extra layer. This is erotic and hot, incredible work!
6/4/24, 4:09 AM
I was hooked from the very beginning! So good.
6/4/24, 3:07 AM
Amazing work, super hot
6/4/24, 12:00 AM
This was outstanding. Holy moly I wanna meet that leather Daddy.
6/3/24, 10:17 PM
Wow. Wow wow wow. Outstandingly done You tease with "...excited"? I came hard enough to splash myself in the face. Did not mind the cleanup required for enjoying this. Even though I'm not specifically into leather as a kink (though I find the aesthetic hot), this story conveyed the eroticism of it to me. And holy hell was this an amazing adaptation of the "stage hypnotist" trope. The leather convention setup gives a good suspension of disbelief, and the relative normalcy of everything else really makes the total mind control Dom hit even harder.
5/23/24, 10:53 PM
Hey friend, your reference image links seem to be broken!

5/23/24, 11:47 PM
@[A Haruspex](/user/show/10004423) Hmm. I host my images on catbox.moe and they’re working for me. Do any of the “connectivity issues” at the bottom of [this link](https://catbox.moe/faq.php) apply to you?

Anonymous
5/24/24, 12:35 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) For me the individual image links are "loading" forever, and the faq page you linked is also "loading" forever. Edit: I waited long enough for it to "time out" so I guess by forever I mean, it never resolves and just times out.

5/24/24, 9:16 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I like your use of footnotes (I think you're about the first person to use it...) but couldn't you just embed the images themselves in the footnote section?

6/3/24, 12:36 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I didn’t want to force people to have to see the characters the way I do. If I upload the images to the site, can I link people to those images even if the images are never embedded in any story?

6/3/24, 6:34 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) In theory, yes. The images are accessible using a normal URL, and you can embed them as links as any other external link.
6/3/24, 5:44 PM
I liked when he told him he loved him. 🥹
5/31/24, 8:35 PM
This was a hot and sexy story!

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I knew you’d like this one, too! Glad you read it.
5/27/24, 5:31 AM
Sexy and lighthearted, and wonderfully capturing the allure or porn scripts. And it’s fun to be in the head of a roleplayer, walking that rope between cheesy acting and keeping the horniness up. Great job, really. And thanks so much for gifting us with your stories

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I appreciate every time you comment! It feels good to have almost a “regular” who sees a Soren Fitz story and knows “oh yeah that’s gonna be fun,” heh, and comments are always a gift to me. But yeah, getting into the head of a roleplayer was a blast. Time taught me a lot about that mindset so I could write this, and I felt like it added something really fun, interesting, and unique to the scene that I hoped would make it possibly more immersive than even pure porn logic, because there was a reason for the top’s surreal dialogue and actions. Glad it was fun!
5/25/24, 9:02 PM
Another outstanding work, Soren! You nailed that almost-otherworldly fantasy vibe that porn provides that we all buy into, the suspension of disbelief and just rolling with it. Concurred with some of the other commenters - great pick of references, you have good taste! Can't wait to see what other porny scenarios you can think up, and I'll be there to read 'em! ;)

6/3/24, 12:45 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, it’s the “rolling with it” that was so vital to the fantasy here. As long as Marco, the POV, acts like the situation is normal, so can the readers—and even the little “shocks to the system” where the fantasy is revealed to be just a roleplay don’t have to affect that feeling of normality. As easily as you can pause your porn vid and respond to a message on your phone, so you can step out of the fantasy for a moment and then step back in.