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6/4/24, 8:00 PM
Gotta agree with the comments above. This is an incredible hot and well written story. The gradual transition is really appealing. Great work!
6/2/24, 1:18 PM
This is superbly written, captivating, with amazingly deep characters and a world that feels real and lived in. Not to mention absolutely smolderingly hot! Its the kind of writing I'd expect from a New York Times Bestseller. I'm over the moon with how gripping this story is, as well as inspired and hoping to learn from this story so as to incorporate this level of craftsmenship into my own writing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

6/4/24, 3:35 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I wasn't expecting to log on today and see a comment with this high a praise, especially when i wasn't 100% confident with this chapter. Thanks for keepong me interested in pursuing this story Kyle, I'm glad you're enjoyong it!
6/4/24, 2:51 PM
Wow! Always love reading stories where the big guy falls into submission. The pacing was kept it going. And how is submission was like a constant haze over his mind. Or how his only thoughts were of his new Master. His new gear suits him well. Though may I recommend having Mark in some rubber. If leather is for doms, then rubber and latex are for subs and slaves. Plus seeing his muscled body outlined in that stuff would be hawt. But either way, please keep going if you can.
6/4/24, 11:13 AM
Great scene! Hope for more.
6/4/24, 6:02 AM
I have reread this epic; it gets better with multiple readings. I can hardly wait for the story's continuation.
6/4/24, 4:12 AM
Tremendous writing. The pacing is brilliant and the concept is fantastic. The ease with which Rob 'identifies' Mark as not really a dom and the arousal and tension that creates in the crowd. Their probably asking themselves whether it just Mark's true nature he'd been putting on an act to hide, or if Rob had made him into a sub. The gradual succumbing to it, that he doesn't even hear the advice for doms because he's not one any more was genius. Combining it with an appreciation from leather is also nicely done and gives it an extra layer. This is erotic and hot, incredible work!
6/4/24, 4:09 AM
I was hooked from the very beginning! So good.
6/4/24, 3:07 AM
Amazing work, super hot
6/4/24, 12:00 AM
This was outstanding. Holy moly I wanna meet that leather Daddy.