Recent Comments

Oct 1, 2023
ZD
8/28/25, 11:49 AM
any news?
8/27/25, 7:54 PM
So I have to admit this Travis feels different then how he first appeared and I honestly can't say I'm that big of a fan of him gaining dominance. And honestly things feel as if they are going in a direction that feels different than what it looked like it was going to go which makes me more worried. The premise and the start was fun. The sleep study and subliminal hypno were great but yeah.

Anonymous
8/28/25, 7:46 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I think you have a specific set of expectations for a direction the story was never gonna go in. This is perfectly in line with what I was hoping for, it’s hot as fuck. It’s also in line with this author’s usual (sexy as hell) style of writing and story plots
8/28/25, 5:39 AM
Fuck…think i have the mantra running in my head as much as it runs in Mike’s! It might be interesting to explore locking him up…but with such control…he is basically already locked…and isn’t the mental control so much hotter than physical devices?
8/28/25, 4:54 AM
I am loving this too. I also want to see a bath house orgy with fisting and piss play or maybe in a adult store or club. Either way I hope Josh does not get to big a conscience and try to Factor on the good work that's on into Mike already.
8/28/25, 4:10 AM
You are a very fine author. Thank you for this story.
8/27/25, 8:14 PM
im LOVING this. I REALLY want to see Josh pimping Mike our to another guys.
8/27/25, 1:43 PM
thank you Jack! this is one of the best stories I've read and I've been a fan of your series for a while. I didn't quite imagine I would fall for Pete as a character more than Sammy, the character development was insane. where do I find more of them?
Anonymous
8/27/25, 10:41 AM
I’m loving this story, it’s developing so well and I can’t wait to see what happens next. The piss was a fun addition. I’m sure there’s plenty more ways this can develop, and plenty more things you’ve already teased at.
8/25/25, 9:03 PM
Wait where's the rest 😭

8/27/25, 2:16 AM
@[Pogonophile](/user/show/10016025) Sorry... I have like a 50-story pile up at this point. But the actual plan is to write the second book of Reindeer Clause, then write this book.

8/27/25, 2:42 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Haha it's all good, I know. I just enjoyed it so much. So far, I've enjoyed all of your writing greatly! Your style is just really cohesive and works well. Hope all is going well! <3