Recent Comments

7/10/25, 3:31 AM
Wait, is this a repeat of the last chapter? It’s slightly different, but ultimately the same. Dunno if this was intentional. Still a hot read

7/18/25, 4:49 PM
@[Tusky](/user/show/10018152) it's sort of reinforcing, upping the ante.
Mark
7/18/25, 2:36 PM
I get so excited whenever I see your name pop up, Jack! Another amazing piece of work. This hits a lot of buttons for me and I’m eager for the next part!
7/18/25, 12:27 PM
How the mighty have fallen! Another great chapter from the master of gay fiction.
Jul 14, 2025
7/18/25, 2:58 AM
Fantastic as always, Rubbersome! Glad to see you’re writing again.
Jul 14, 2025
7/16/25, 9:59 AM
Perfection! Always glad to read more from you. This was exactly what I needed to cum.
Jul 14, 2025
7/15/25, 3:08 PM
Thanks for posting another hot story. Here's hoping the new drones pass out more condoms and receive orders to join in the fun when the hive transmits "THIS DRONE SUBMITTS".
Cubreader
7/12/25, 6:04 AM
As if I wasn’t gripped as it is with the first chapter, this installment had me so hot and bothered I had to cum back again and again while reading it. Makes me even more excited where the author will take the story. Lots of options to explore, from the current flashback and each camp newcomer’s corruption, to Connor’s backstory, and jumping back to Edward’s present (and perhaps future?). Gonna set up camp and eagerly wait for what cums next.

7/13/25, 10:04 AM
@Cubreader Thanks for the comment, glad you're enjoying it! More good stuff in store. Anything you'd especially love to see? More insight into Connor and the start of Edward's corruption coming up.

Cubreader
7/14/25, 7:57 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Looking forward to all the good stuff! Thank you for responding to comments, I really couldn't help sharing how much I enjoyed the story. I agree with the anonymous commenter about the excellent world building. You describe the descent to corruption of each character so well that I end up savoring every word. I'm curious to see how Rausch's origins (and maybe how his dynamic with Charlie began), and how this impacts them in the story's present. With Edward's corruption of Ollie, I wonder to see how he will teach Ollie his ways. Will Edward be similar to Rausch or will he have his own ways of making the most of the white orchid? The parallel stories worked so well in terms of how it gave the narrative have a particular rhythm, maybe drawing the parallels again to Ollie's corruption and Edward's and weaving them together sounds like an exciting way to tie the story together.

7/15/25, 10:45 AM
@Cubreader Love these extra thoughts. Will definitely try to flex the parallel stories across time since people are enjoying that. Will need some reworking of my drafts but I'm excited to integrate that a bit more. One of the things I'm trying hard at is I really want to make each of the characters feel like individuals even if similar things happen to them, or they are influenced by the same substance. So the parallel might be able to come in there...good ideas! Charlie does have some interesting backstory. We'll at least seeing more of him in the next chapter to get more of an idea of who he is and what Rausch has done to him.
Mar
7/15/25, 9:35 AM
Amazing… hopefully we can read the next chapter
Jul 14, 2025
7/14/25, 10:31 PM
Ooh! Your writing again! Fantastic! Can’t wait to see where this story goes.
Jul 14, 2025
7/14/25, 9:51 PM
What an unexpected treat -- a story from rubbrsome! Thank you -- hot as always. Great scenario.