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10/19/24, 3:14 AM
I love seeing Josh so strong with some people and so weak when it comes to his little brother.he definitely knows his place.And this ending is too frustrating, can't wait to see how Johnny Football will be treated like the slut he is by all these roommates. Good job Jack as always
10/19/24, 2:01 AM
Great story! Hope it continues!
Anonymous
10/19/24, 12:18 AM
Hope for more wedgies
Anonymous
10/19/24, 12:17 AM
This was hot and I can't wait to see what happens next!!
10/18/24, 8:06 PM
I hope you’ll consider continuing this exceptionally hot story! I am eager to see where the characters go from here! Thank you for writing it!
Damion
10/18/24, 12:40 PM
This is a hot story. Love to see how the brothers of Satan grow.
10/18/24, 9:28 AM
Hot chapter. It ended on a exciting cliffhanger though. Can't wait too see what would happen to John.
10/18/24, 7:39 AM
This is incredibly hot it has me ready to bust already. I can’t wait to read what happens next
jj allen
10/18/24, 4:28 AM
I want to be Tom
fan
10/16/24, 6:24 PM
reread this again; sometimes I wonder what if jake and dave's bodies are linked up in the end. it turns out that they were united after all as alpha and beta in service of the administrator though i am unsure if the administrator would choose that decision willfully; would it consciously let them?

10/17/24, 9:19 PM
@fan I remember when writing "Brain Feed", I always had a feeling that Dave had some power of suggestion in being paired up with Jacob. That he gave a recommendation, and that suggestion was for Jacob to become a beta drone, and the two of them be paired together. I mean if the drones become the eyes and ears and sensors, then the Administrator does need to be a little receptive to what the drones are perceiving. So I remember thinking that Dave would have suggested that he be paired with Jacob. Then of course, the facility would do an in-depth analysis whether this would benefit their goals. Would Dave and Jacob's DNA create powerful hybrid clones? Would Jacob be a suitable beta drone, or is he better suited as an Alpha? After the analysis was conducted, the facility determined that Dave was correct in his observation and carried out the drone's suggestion. Whether there was an emotional or logical purpose behind Dave's suggestion ... that's for the reader to determine. I remember, when I wrote the original Brain Feed, that I always liked the idea that Dave could assert some control ... or have some minor influence over the Administrator. Or maybe, in a way, a man could make a suggestion: "Jacob would be more receptive to our goals if you pair us up; me as the Alpha, him as the beta." Even though I had this idea when writing, I just couldn't incorporate it into the story. Everything is told from Jacob's perspective. And there was no way for me to show the reader what Dave was thinking internally.