Recent Comments

6/26/24, 3:12 AM
I too am keen for the next chapter asap!
6/26/24, 1:12 AM
This is an excellent story! You do a fantastic job setting up the main characters as despicable—especially when they plan to turn Dereck into a slave and steal everything from him—so it is very satisfying to see them fall victim to their own trap. An excellent karmic twist ending! One note, if I may, about word choice: a few times in the story you mention the characters massaging/feeling another man’s “breasts.” While men CAN have breasts, I think in this context you mean the chest muscles or nipples, so it may be better to use “pecs” (short for pectorals, the name for the chest muscles) in future stories. The tale is still incredible—wanted to make that small note. Thank you again and congratulations on your first story! :)

6/26/24, 3:03 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks a lot! The review is much appreciated, specially the pointers about wording. Will surely keep it in mind! :P
6/26/24, 2:10 AM
That was quite a story. Very hot
6/25/24, 11:36 PM
Really well written Sir

6/26/24, 12:55 AM
@[FaggyBaby](/user/show/525906) Thanks, boy ;)
6/26/24, 12:25 AM
Loving this!
6/25/24, 5:36 PM
Loved to see the dom tops falling into their own trap hahaha. Nicely written, thanks for posting

6/25/24, 7:40 PM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) Thanks for reading! :)
6/25/24, 1:57 PM
Very well written! Became so horny while reading!

6/25/24, 2:39 PM
@[Nick Rivers](/user/show/10014837) I am glad you enjoyed it! :D
Anonymous
6/25/24, 7:02 AM
Hope you have the oportunity of continue with this amazing series, waiting patiently for the next chapters!
Anonymous
6/24/24, 11:48 PM
Please yes keep going