Recent Comments

6/26/24, 2:08 AM
Wait. I’m sorry. Totally lost here. Had Mav claimed Pete? Was I completely insane in that I didn’t think there was even a question that Sammy had?

6/26/24, 2:15 AM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) I’m not sure if I understand your question, can you rephrase it?

6/27/24, 3:44 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks for writing back! Yeah, so I guess I’m confused. I thought it was Sammy who claimed Pete. His teammates wondered who might top the new coach first, and Sammy said he was off limits. Right? (When Mav stops the guys in the sauna, I took that as respect for the Parkers or the process in general.) But now, it seems that Mav had claimed Pete back whenever, which is why he orchestrated sleeping on Pete’s couch. Which is right? Am I missing something?

6/27/24, 3:46 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Mav was sent to get Pete back on track and with Eden again. He hadn’t claimed anyone, he was there to maneuver Sammy into submitting and to get Pete to admit his feelings so he’d stop fighting the Eden way.
6/27/24, 9:25 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing this story! I had a blast reading it and hope to read more of your work in the future. Some off word choices but still a very fun read, especially with the doms getting caught in their own trap.

6/27/24, 12:15 PM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thanks a lot! I will definetly post more. :)
speedoladtom
6/26/24, 8:46 PM
love it. needs a part two!

6/27/24, 2:06 AM
@[speedoladtom](/user/show/917803) Glad you enjoyed it :D
6/25/24, 11:15 PM
I vote g string

6/26/24, 2:14 PM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) haha unfortunately the next chapter is already written
HypnoMutt
6/26/24, 1:10 PM
Would love to see you continue this excellent story!
6/26/24, 4:28 AM
This Ouroborus ending. So fucking hot! It was a wonderful and deliciously karmic ending, one of the best endings I have ever read.

6/26/24, 11:46 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you so much for the compliment, I love myself some karma ;)
Martin
12/3/23, 6:03 AM
Hey Alpha, This story had been brought to my attention and I just read it the first time. I really enjoy your stories, but they're sometimes walking a thin line. I don't mind strong themes of power exchange and non-con stories, as long as they're sufficiently unrealistic. I've stated a couple of times that I couldn't live with the idea that someone takes a story on my sites as a blueprint on how to rape someone for real. This story is already published and I don't want to change that now. If you continue it, which I welcome, I'd appreciate it if you add an element that clearly puts it in the realm of fantasy. Like a whole factory of boy-slaves, which is so over the top, that it isn't realistic in any way anymore. Thank you.

6/26/24, 4:58 AM
@Martin I’ll make a note for future stories. I’m sorry. Didn’t mean to cause any issue.
6/26/24, 4:46 AM
Phewwwwf let's make this boy a good little fag!!
6/26/24, 4:27 AM
I vote g string
2/14/24, 1:58 AM
Y’all are too kind. I’ve had this idea marinating in my head for a long time. The Mad Science prompt was the catalyst I needed to finally put it into words. By the way, this is the first erotic story I’ve ever written, and I’m absolutely blown away by the reception. Thank you to everyone.

6/26/24, 4:11 AM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Wow! Your first story and it was this good! You must be a regular writer outside of kink. If you need prompts I would be happy to give you some. or ideas