Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/27/25, 5:30 AM
DAMN! Why do your stories hit it right here (pointing to heart). I don't have to tell you, you have an amazing gift as a story teller. I'm sure you hear that a lot. Though I'm a dom, I must admit some of the scenes were just too extreme for me but STILL, I keep reading because you get to the heart and not just the groin. I feel like John AND Sammy are close friends now. I can't wait to get to know Eli. I do have a question: for context, when Sammy said he's "gonna get the coach fired" was the the coach before Pete or was that the time when Pete just got to Eden? Just curious.

7/27/25, 9:42 AM
@Anonymous John was set behind the main story so he’s talking about the old coach not Pete.
Jul 26, 2025
7/27/25, 6:45 AM
Damn, loved this story! Would love to read about more of their escapades…you are bound :)
Jul 26, 2025
7/27/25, 1:54 AM
Very hot
7/27/25, 12:31 AM
Do I really have to say how amazing this chapter was? Thank you, Jack, for this chapter. I can't imagine how satisfying it must have been for the UT guys to destroy, humiliate, and treat Johnny Football like a dog. (I admit that now I would have a little trouble seeing him as a top), but besides this, it's a big step for John. I guess being Johnny Football isn’t easy…I hope his relationship with Noah will evolve as he wishes.
Jul 26, 2025
7/26/25, 11:17 PM
Very hot mental and physical changes!
Jul 26, 2025
7/26/25, 9:54 PM
amaaaaazing stuff. i love a vers couple and the power exchange/flip fucking was great.
7/26/25, 7:43 PM
What to say. You know us all. Tops. Bottoms. Switches. Every species of us you know. And you weave your understanding of us into your stories so that we all end up funding out something about ourselves. Every chapter is a like therapy and leaves me believing I'm lucky to have stumbled upon your work. Noble and hot and dirty, your heros are made of the right stuff and the villains you create get their due.
7/26/25, 4:09 AM
Thanks again, Jack. You see into people and know reactions all too well. You are a genius. I salute you.
KinkWhore
7/25/25, 5:26 PM
Need a part 2 with more hung soldiers being used as breeding whores
Liam
7/25/25, 2:44 PM
Loved this, really hope we get at least a part two!